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The Young Protectors: Legendary Chapter One—Page 23

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Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day, Kyle?

Uncensored (and extra-sexy!) version of this page available for $5+ Patrons here. 🙂

So! Things are getting even more serious! Spooky even used the b-word! For that face! (What do you think? Is he right?) What could possibly come next?

Tune in this Wednesday to find out! Hope to see you there! 😀

  • Eruption ohoy!

  • <3

    This might just make me fall in love with Spooky just a little bit.

  • Madock345

    My brain won’t stop reading that last line in a really ominous tone, it sounds like the kind of thing you say right before “too bad I have to kill you”

    • saradovahkiin

      I can’t unthink that now!

  • Bei Dawei

    “Your hair is orange and curly, just like Trump’s!”

    • Oh please, no. Don’t bring him into it here and ruin the good about this page. It’s not even true.

      • Bei Dawei

        Try not to think about Spooky’s belly in panel 4, then.

        It’s YUGE !

        • Michael

          Stop with the body policing, please.

    • Now see, that would kill an erection immediately!

  • Spooky loves watching ecstatic joy too.

  • Just love how verbal Kyle is about what’s happening. I’m sure it’s a great help for Spooky, not to mention it’s hot. Spooky is really attentive to what Kyle needs right now. Both watching him, listening and asking.

    /fans self. It’s getting hot in here.

    • davefragments

      I think Kyle is afraid he going to burst into flames and Spooky is reassuring him that he isn’t.

      • Yup. He’s good at calming *that* part of Spooky down while heating up the rest 🙂

  • fujoshifanatic

    What I love about this page is that even though this has comparatively almost no censoring in relation to the previous pages, it is by far the sexiest one to date. I am loving this so hard that I’m about to shoot flames from my nethers, forget about Kyle!

    • Jeff Baker

      Yes! I agree!

    • Michael

      Absolutely. This page is just so good, and almost nothing is lost in the censored version. It’s the faces that sell it. Kyle’s “almost-O” face is just so hot.

  • Jeff Baker

    The feeling between the two guys (affection as well as sex) comes off perfectly in this page!

  • I want someone to look at me the way Spooky looks at Kyle.

    • Michael

      I want to make someone make Kyle’s face in the last panel.

      • Bei Dawei

        D =

        (this side up) –>

  • Cman65

    My BF always looked so beautiful at this moment

  • Bei Dawei

    Next page: “Ow, it got in my eye!”

  • Michael

    Hi all, sorry I missed camping, I was having lunch with my extended family.

    This page is just absolutely gorgeous, with or without censoring. There’s just so much emotion in those faces, the way Kyle’s eyes shine with affection and shy excitement, Spooky’s mischievous little grin, the way Kyle closes his eyes and opens his mouth in a breathless shuddering convulsion of penultimate ecstasy…

    Just, really well done. Julie, Vero… I bow to you both. Amazing work.

    Oh, and the script was great too, Alex. Neither too little nor too much.

    • Kate G

      Camp? Camp? Camp is today! You missed….oh, wait you mean Friday’s camp. – whistles – Yup, I missed that camp too.

    • stickfigurefairytales

      Hi Doki love!!

  • Aitsuki

    XD Kyle’s “O” face honestly made me giggle a little.

  • bronakopdin

    their blushing is so cute ^^

  • Dennis Grace

    Cute storyline, but I miss the Kyle who actually looked like a superhero. Where are the muscles? And why hasn’t Kyle burst into flames?

    • Justin

      Re: bursting into flames, I think that’s the entire point of this scenario. Spooky’s helping Kyle experiment, because if Kyle bursts into/shoots flames, Spooky wouldn’t be hurt.

    • davefragments

      Julie Wright is doing the pencils for this chapter while Adam DeKraker takes a sabbatical.

    • He can control his fire better now. This night is partly to check if he can also do it fully during sex.

  • Nate

    There’s something utterly fitting about Spooks saying Kyle is beautiful while Kyle makes the goofiest facial expression of the chapter… 🙂

    Also… CUTENESS OVERLOAD!!!

  • Jason Moon

    Did Kyle come so hard that his ears popped?

    If he can control his flames during sex, he’ll be way too spent to even light a candle afterwards.

  • D. G.

    I feel so happy for Kyle that he is finally able to enjoy sex with a sexy, kind partner. I have my fingers crossed that he can suppress the flames through his orgasm. Alex, what r u up to??? Can’t wait for Wednesday!

  • SchalaRenee

    Let’s see some flames! Sexual fire or literal, as long as it’s with Kyle and Spooky. Spooky can control demon magic after all, so Kyle’s fire shouldn’t be an issue if it does come (no pun intended) to him releasing fire.

  • GeorgeTSLC

    First, I know that my response to “beautiful” is conditioned by my being young half a century ago, when it was never applied to men. So I’ll instead answer, “Is Kyle gorgeous?”

    My answer for both this sequence and the previous ones by different artists is, “No, but good-looking–not so much now as he used to be.” And Ms. Wright has given him a nice body here, where he previously had a VERY nice body.

  • Jason Moon

    Kyle’s post-coitus talk: “You need to ignite your stove’s gas range? Get matches, dude.(Yawn)”

  • Wayne Lunkwitz

    That last frame…….are we going for ……this is going to be good…..or……that burning sensation……like a lava flow down the back of my leg……and on the ceiling and the curtains………..

  • Snorlaxation

    I’m wondering if we’ll still see a little bit of flame pop up

  • Sollin Faolan

    I’m ready for the FLAMES~

  • davefragments

    I am hoping that in the annals of organs that Spooky and Kyle’s joint efforts will be “legendary.”
    That would include a giant pillar of fire attracting lots of tiny flying ninja robots with tiny buckets of Halon and crystal pure mountain water.
    Or possibly teeny-tiny little male fire demons erupting from Kyle and searching the world for something they desperately want and need (ask me what, go ahead ask me what they are searching for and I will answer “why teeny-tiny fire demon women, of course!”)

  • ok, I think someone is more in love than the other.

  • Saxon_Brenton

    An observation:
    So every few pages someone who’s an occasional reader asks about the risk of Kyle losing control of his fire powers when he reaches climax, and more regular readers assure them that Kyle has gained much better control of his powers.

    And I’ve found that every time that explanation appears, I think: Well, that’s certainly what Kyle thinks, and is probably part of what Spooky thinks. But I’m wondering if part of Spooky’s motivation might also be ‘You’ve has control of your powers for several weeks now, and been out on dates, but you haven’t gotten laid yet. Man, that’s messed up. We’ve got to get you laid.’

    And I don’t say this (merely) because Spooky is such a sexual person, or particularly because he wants to be the one to take Kyle’s virginity. I’m suspecting that Spooky thinks that Kyle may be procrastinating, and unless he’s pushed Kyle will never get around to having proper sex.

    Your thoughts?

    • Spooky is wise. I can see that, I also think Spooky likes Kyle a LOT.

    • davefragments

      Since this story and chapter began. I have had thoughts about what is in Kyle’s mind. Those ideas haven’t solidified but they are coherent enough to put into words:
      I think Kyle has no problem going out and dating other guys. I think his timidness at revealing his sexuality was put to rest in his defeating Laampros. That was a huge character building success. However, I don’t think that Kyle brags about it. He still has some fear and humbleness about his manner. The fear is that when he starts kissing a guy and is getting into the hot and heavy action that he might have to stop for flames. I think he wants to keep that side of him hidden or at least minimized. It’s hard to date the really good guys and not the thrill seekers or sycophant types if you have to brag about defeating Laampros and being the most powerful being on the planet.
      Its like who honestly dates the very, very rich guy with all that money just sitting there, or who dates Clark Kent a second time if they figure out that he’s Superman? That makes Kyle wither a bad date or a platonic date.
      It think Spooky and Kyle are trying to end the fear of flaming eyeballs or overly hot emissions (I’m trying not to be crude), or leaking flaming fluids.
      Just my thoughts.

    • stickfigurefairytales

      I don’t know – I think this is more of a test run on both their parts to see whether Kyle does indeed have control over his powers when having sex, combined with genuine attraction on both sides.

      I have a bit of an issue with saying that Kyle is “procrastinating” when it comes to having sex. There’s no set timeline out there that delineates when a person should want or be ready to have sex, and I think that goes double for someone who has just been through a deeply traumatic experience.

      I’m also troubled by the use of the term “proper sex.” I’m guessing that you’re using it here to mean experiencing an orgasm with a partner (as opposed to referring strictly to penetrative sex), but again, I don’t think there’s a right or wrong way to be sexually active as long as all parties are enthusiastically consenting.

      TL;DR – I may be misinterpreting what you are trying to say here, but some of your phrasing kind of rubs me the wrong way. Personally, I think that Spooky and Kyle here are both motivated by the desire to determine whether Kyle can safely control his powers when having sex with someone, and by their mutual attraction and affection for each other. I don’t feel like it’s about needing to clear a hurdle, exactly.

  • Mekichichifu

    So……why is the art so different??

    • davefragments

      Julie Wright is doing the pencils for this chapter while Adam DeKraker, the previous artist, takes a sabbatical. She also did the “Truth or Dare” chapter in “Engaging the Enemy.”

      added link:
      http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ete-tod-page-1/

  • Kate G

    When people think your funny faces are beautiful.

    Did everyone forget about camp?

    • davefragments

      Hi Kate

      • Kate G

        Heya Dave! How was your day?

        • davefragments

          Drizzly and cold. I did some serious editing on a real mess of a short story and some laundry. And voted.
          How was your day?

          • Kate G

            It is quite chilly here as well, and my dog has stolen my newly acquired electric throw blanket because of the cold. This is day two of such stealing. She literally cries and shakes until I take the blanket off my person and put it on her. I have put in a very firm request that the dog get her own blanket. It’s only $30. My dad still laughs that she stole my blanket. I am not thrilled. I never wanted dog fur on it in the first place!

            My lesson was cancelled, but that was okay as I just went to the saddlery shop and got a new helmet. My other one was too small. I was adjusting mine and my nephew decided to copy me with the old one. I tried to get the old one back so I could donate it to my barn (it was only a year old and in great condition) and my nephew said very firmly, “NO!” and threw it hard on my basement floor.

            Nephew won. He now has a $70 helmet to play with.

          • davefragments

            I had a doggie like that. Mostly because I spoiled him rotten.

          • davefragments

            added: I don’t know what to say about the helmet.

          • Kate G

            Oh, she’s very spoiled. She’s also very old. She’s nearly 14. She has her own custom made winter peacoat, custom made rain coat, booties (she had terrible frostbite one year), many sweaters, I crocheted her her own blanket (which she refuses to use except at night), is allowed on all of the furniture, has four sets of bowls, eats a fridge food diet, gets pawdicures every month, gets a walk every day…she’s very, very spoiled.

            I was a little peeved about the helmet. You know, it’s $70. XD But, I can’t give a potentially unstable helmet to a barn that helps people with special needs like me. But, he’s little so I have to pick my fights and that one wasn’t worth picking a fight over. He’s not riding a real horse (only a stick horse), so let him have an unsound helmet. XD

    • Saxon_Brenton

      Just been a bit busy at work, is all.
      Today someone bought to the workroom some novelty confectionary from the New Zealand Giftshop: some chocolate covered raisins called ‘Kiwi Poo’. And yesterday there were chocolate covered peanuts called ‘Sheep Droppings’. Both bags of noms had cartoons of their respective animals, smiling at the brown coloured lumps lying on the ground.

      • Kate G

        Well, that’s an oddity. I have seen such “poo” animals, but normally it’s a little plastic toy and little bits of chocolate and the animals “poops” it out. I’m sure little children are simply enthralled with the whole notion but all I can think of in a quite sarcastic voice is, “Charming. Simply charming.”

        • davefragments

          On the note of odd food stuff:
          Hidden Valley Ranch Dressing has created a Christmas Gift for those who are Ranch Dressing fanatics — A mini-keg (in steel) of Ranch Dressing.
          The drawback is that it costs $50

          • stickfigurefairytales

            Why does anyone need that much ranch dressing at once? *shudders*

          • davefragments

            I don’t know. Even if I was a Ranch Dressing Fanatic and a complete vegetarian for salads, I wouldn’t keep that much around to go bad or out of date.

          • stickfigurefairytales

            Maybe if someone was having a massive party or family reunion, and lots of people there loved ranch dressing. But still…that sounds like an awful lot.

          • davefragments

            Big tailgating fanatics…

            Personally, balsamic vinegar or Wine vinegar and Olive oil for me.

          • stickfigurefairytales

            Oh, for salads – that makes sense. I was thinking more of people who use it as a dip.

        • Saxon_Brenton

          This and other pieces of evidence makes me think I have an inappropriate sense of humour, and further makes me wonder why it hasn’t gotten me into more trouble over the years.

          • Kate G

            Oh, I’m quite inappropriate. I laugh at all fart jokes. I can’t help it. I find poop quite vile, but then one must understand I have a nearly 3-year old nephew and I’ve seen enough poop to make me gag. Vomit as well. I can’t do the vomit thing. Vomit, drool and poop. I just – shudders – no. No.

            Athletes doing epic fails in their sport. Fart jokes. The Minions. Inappropriate puns. Puns in general. Things like this ( https://pin.it/s2tD46_ ). I laugh until I cry. I have laughed until I peed in my pants at some of Stephen Colbert’s most terrible, inappropriate jokes. I’m quite terrible sometimes.

      • Since the late 80’s a Danish candy producer, called BonBon, has been producing various candy with weird names. Very weird names. In the 90’s when the hype was the biggest, there was 50+ variants of candy, and there was even collector stickers for the variants (today I wish I had collected more/not used them because they’re now a cult-item/valuable if you got a lot). We even have a BonBon Land amusement park in Denmark, and it’s still running. Not a huge visitor attraction, but likely more because of location as other parks are closer to tourist places.
        The company was sold to another candy company in early 2000’s, and they sadly cut down the variations a LOT, because they found some of the names unsuited for kids (who loved the weirdness of the names), and several loved flavor/type versions dissapeared.

        Still, candy that has survived all the way since ‘the old days’ is mostly candy drops of various kinds.
        I can mention names like (translated): Duck Food, Dog Farts, Rotten Fish, Seagull Droppings, Blue Owls, Garbage Dump – mix of the other varieties, Ear Wax (oh, I miss when you could buy bags with only those), Banana Boys and Sewage Sludge.

        Recently some other variants have returned, made by another producer.

        • stickfigurefairytales

          That sounds awesome.

          • It’s good candy. Hope more lf the ‘oldies’ return.

  • Camping on what seems to be a little unsteady wifi-connection. The internet provider is probably having tech issues and/or doing updates.
    But hi everyone 🙂

    • davefragments

      hi Danish

    • stickfigurefairytales

      I’m having similar issues, but in my case it’s more my wireless not having great range. I’m going to try a different booster, I think.

      • That sucks. Hopenyou get it solved.

        • stickfigurefairytales

          Thanks! I thought I had it about a week ago, but the wireless booster thing I got from my mom was actually just broadcasting the signal of my family’s old wireless connection. I’m not even sure how that works.

          But I’m going to see whether I can either reset it for my wireless or if I can get a new one fairly cheaply.

    • stickfigurefairytales

      Also, hi!

      • davefragments

        Hi Stick

        • stickfigurefairytales

          Hi Dave! How are you tonight?

          • davefragments

            OK. I thought that a movie to ignore the world while camping for the page update (Better than leaving on the endless news channels) was Adrienne Barbeau in SWAMPT THING but that movie was awful SWAMP THING was better and it didn’t have Adrienne’s cleavage.

          • stickfigurefairytales

            I am sorry.

          • davefragments

            So am I.

    • Kate G

      My wi-fi is weird. In some parts of my house, you can get wi-fi gret. Move two inches over…good-bye wi-fi.

      • stickfigurefairytales

        Hee hee, that rhymes!

        • Kate G

          It kind of does, doesn’t it? It’s got a rhythm to it anyway. How have you been settling into your new place? Are you fully unpacked?

          • stickfigurefairytales

            I’ve made a lot of good progress, but I still need to unpack pretty much everything in my study, plus all of my craft supplies. But most everything else is unpacked. 🙂

            I had a FANTASTIC time on my first Halloween in my new house! My brother came over and we handed out candy and watched old Halloween movies together (non-horror ones, like It’s the Great Pumpkin, Charlie Brown and The Nightmare Before Christmas). We got about 70 trick-or-treaters in all!

          • Kate G

            Yea, we’re still unpacking here. I need to hang up the art in my room and buy some shelves to put on my wall to put up some stuff and then I’ll be done really, but the garage, guest room and basement…ha ha ha ha ha. Yea. Boxes. It’s funny. We look moved in but we aren’t. Typical military thing.

            Halloween here was great too. We have lots of little kids here and I love Halloween (my parents don’t) so I finally get my wish that next year we get to decorate for Halloween. YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES.

          • Glad that I am not the only one that watches that classic anymore. ^_^ Personally, I believe in the Great Pumpkin. ^_^

          • stickfigurefairytales

            Thank you very much for asking!

  • davefragments

    Patreon Rumbles

    • davefragments

      It’s a double page, too

      • Rapiret

        A pretty amazing one, might I add. Idk how well it’ll carry for the censors though

      • stickfigurefairytales

        Oooh!

  • Klaus

    Alex will have to cut most of this for the SFW version, I think.

    • stickfigurefairytales

      This is making me so intrigued and curious.

    • Hmm, there is the option of a black triangle in the middle, but maybe it will be the cut of the panel. Faces say a lot though.

      • Bei Dawei

        Is this what they call a “splash” page?

        • Klaus

          Indeed.

      • Kate G

        HEe hee hee, I can think of what the black triangle could be and I’m laughing thinking about it.

        • And you are most likely correct.

          • Kate G

            HA HA HA HA HA HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. That would be really awkward in a way though. Head, torso, big triangle for the nether region, then legs. I’d be laughing though.

        • Bei Dawei

          Next time maybe it will be a black circle.

    • davefragments

      There’s an “S” in “pages” …
      Why am I surprised! 😉