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The Young Protectors: Legendary Chapter One—Page 16

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Smiles all around.

Uncensored (and extra-sexy!) version of this page available for $5+ Patrons here. 🙂

I knew this page was going to be another tough one to censor artfully, and it was, but I’ll be able to show much more on the next page—and our heroes will even say a few words back and forth! (Which will also make what they’ve been doing on these last couple pages more clear, just in case it hasn’t been. 😉 )

Meanwhile, over on the Patreon page, we’ve just grown to over 1,300 Patrons—that’s 300 new Patrons since the end of August! That means that not only am I able to break even, but I’ll now be able to begin to make up for being underwater for the last year, and start building back my savings. That’s huge! You really are all superheroes! Thank you all so, so much!

So! Spooky’s definitely enjoying Kyle’s attention, but it looks like Spooky’s also putting a smile on Kyle’s lips. And they’re actually supposed to say things to each other on the next page? What could these two possibly have to talk about in a moment like this?!

Tune in this Saturday to find out! Hope to see you there! 😀

 

  • Wayne Lunkwitz

    All grins from where I’m sitting!

  • Rapiret

    Kyle really seems to know what he’s doing here, it’s pretty fascinating

    • fujoshifanatic

      Who knew he had such natural talents? Spooky is really appreciating them!

    • Madock345

      Maybe he’s half succuboi 🙂

      • Klaus

        Half succubus, half incubus, and fully human.

    • He has some good inspiration. 🙂

  • Bei Dawei

    And then the robot ninjas sneak in, under cover of darkness!

    • Squishy

      Of course! The robot ninjas must be hiding that blacked out panel at the bottom!

      • Madock345

        I bet they’re the ones that keep blacking out the good bits!

  • Klaus

    Maybe Kyle has read the f****** manual?

    • There’s a manual?

      • William Clapie

        Yep, “The Joy of Sex” and “The Kinsey Study” LMBO. The first one has pictures!

    • Rapiret

      I need to get my hands on this manual

  • Bei Dawei

    I think he’s getting fisted.

    • Klaus

      That is the advantage of the censored version. You can imagine anything.

      • Bei Dawei

        This should be a new form of fan art–filling in the black spaces with whatever.

    • Madock345

      Woah, LEWD. This is a clean comic, sir. You’re going to have to take that filth elsewhere. Honestly, it’s just a foot massage between friends, no need to sexualize it.

      • Bei Dawei

        Can somebody photoshop an image of Lemmiwinks onto the censored panel?

  • fujoshifanatic

    In answer to Alex’s question, maybe it’s, “This little piggy went to market…” That’s what they’re doing, right? That game always puts a smile on people’s lips, right?

    • Bei Dawei

      But did he go to the market as a participant in the capitalist system…or as a commodity?

  • Madock345

    If the Patreon keeps shooting up like this, Alex is going to be financially compelled to turn to making porno full time

    …Not that I would complain, of course.

    • Klaus

      Neither would I, since I have no right to. But I would count it as a loss. A sex scene now and then is good, but it is the superhero action and especially the character development I come here for. This scene is an important part in Kyle’s development, and if it is told in considerable more detail than necessary, I can enjoy those details. But a steady stream of porn would not be nearly as interesting to me.

      • Not to worry, guys. This has been a fun change of pace and, since I put a lot of hard work and many months into these scripts, it’s definitely gratifying to see so many folks enjoying this story. (And to finally being able to pay back some of my savings, thanks to the increase in Patreon support, will make a huge difference in my life and my ability to keep making comics.) But ultimately character development and emotional connection are what interest me (which is why you’ll see both in this arc) and I do love creating superhero action scenes.

        After this big, positive response, will I consider creating other erotic scenes in the future? Sure. I certainly want to create work that delights y’all. 🙂 But just to create pure porn from now on? There are other creators who would have more interest and can do that a lot better than me. My goal has always been to tell compelling stories about heroes who just happen to like other guys. That’s not going to change. 🙂

  • Squishy

    “What could these two possibly have to talk about…?” Protection! … You must always be properly prepared before taking on robot ninjas.

  • O.O

  • Machina

    Let’s just hope things don’t end up getting too hot.

  • Morgan

    Spooky is so sexy, oh my God.

  • Kate G

    Wow, that first panel is scrumptious. I think we could all get used to Spooky looking like that.

    • I bet he could get used to it too. 🙂

      • Kate G

        As long as someone kept him warm all the time. 😉

  • Cman65

    A toe curling good blowjob my the looks of it

    • Bei Dawei

      Or maybe just a pedicure.(Toe curling, you say?)

  • Karol Chmielewski

    I kind of like the censored versions it laves more to the imagination good job on the face expressions.

    • Jeff Baker

      I agree! I’ve always believed in subtlety and that less is more! And this looks good!

    • Glad you like those expression, Karol. That’s something I love about Julie’s work—she does an exceptional job capturing the emotions (and sweetness) of our characters. 🙂

  • K.

    How come you don’t just use like a censor bar or blur out the dicks like in manga? In manhwa, they usually tend to shit out everything they wanna censor which is often only the penises. Just wondering! Thanks for this I ship it

    • As I understand it, mahwa and manga put those little bars, etc. over penises for legal reasons that are country-specific. For example, in Japan, it is illegal to show uncovered genitalia (whereas you can show pretty much everything else). In response, the creators add those bars, often quite tiny—which follow the letter of the law, but certainly not the spirit. (Let’s face it, those little bars might as well not be there at all. You still pretty much see everything. Even “glowing cones of light” leave little to the imagination.) That kind of legal “hand-waving” seems to work for both the creators and the lawmakers in Japan, perhaps for cultural reasons.

      In the U.S., such skimpy censorship would give me zero legal protection in terms of not making “over 18” sexual material readily accessible to minors. Also, since manga-style censorship would show pretty much everything, it wouldn’t make this site any more palatable (or legally safe) for those who don’t want to see (or, due to local laws, are legally prohibited from seeing) uncovered weenies. Finally, I think using such skimpy censorship would make the Patreon pages less special—and, while I want folks to be able to follow along here, I do want these pages to be a special reward for the Patreon backers.

      So, while I hadn’t considered trying to imitate Japanese-style censorship until you asked the question, those would be my reasons.

      Very glad to hear you ship Spooky and Kyle, though. This scene was certainly fun for me to write. 🙂

      • Kate G

        I think it would look weird too. I mean, let’s face it, you either show it all or go for artistry. As much as I love doujinshi and manga, the censor bars just look cheesy (if not extremely awkward.) Look at today’s primetime TV shows. Whenever they put in some awful bad word like “fuck” that has to be shown on TV (or show full frontal or boobs. HEAVEN SAKE BOOBS!), producers have to both bleep AND censor the word/boobs/down there with pixels. (Classic case: Anyone remember that awfully funny episode of Modern Family where
        precious tiny Lily learns a cuss word and says it during a wedding,
        making everyone laugh? Remember never hearing the cuss word and seeing
        the blurred mouth? It would have been funnier had they just let the swear word fly, right?)

        I’d rather you try to do something like this and reposition the art to make it still look like art (so you have bigger gutters than normal, I’m fine with that. It allows the imagination to wander.) over just slapping on a bunch of censor bars. It would be so cheesy and I might remember every single page as terrible with all the cheesy pixels. I still remember the Modern Family episode! It was so damn funny, but oh how I wish they chose a different swear word so they could have gone all out! It would have made that episode special because it is something every parent has gone through. [Hey, my first words? Swear words. My mom was not happy, but it makes for such a funny story.]

      • Biippa

        I’ve seen some people on Smackjeeves be forced to go through and censor all their old content as well as new, for example this one I really like reading had to go through and literally remove all dicks. No bars, no pixels, not even a glow (that I remember), just invisidicks. All that unnecessary stuff actually just irritated my eyes to be honest. Another person used octopi as a censor. It was too commical for me to take seriously.

        Seeing something like that in a comic like this would probably throw me so off kilter that I’m glad you use the “total blackout” thing. Makes it easier on the eyes and on my brain haha

      • Soubi

        That is a good explanation. Thank you.

  • Nate

    *rendered speechless by Happy!Spooky*

  • Earl Patterson

    LAAMPROS BA SUKOTH BA SUGGOROTH!

    • Bei Dawei

      Or maybe Kyle should say it:
      “WRMMF MBM SMMF MBM SMGRMF!”

  • Jason Moon

    If Kyle is SERVICING Spooky, I don’t think he can talk with his mouth full.

    And I’m sure Spooky is glad THOSE nerve endings work.

  • unknownlight927

    Kyle really seems to have the “Sex Thing’ down, which some people might find weird but it really isn’t. Some people are just wired that way, or maybe Spooky just brings out the best in him. Spooky and Kyle are just so GREAT together and I really hope they become a proper couple!! 🙂 🙂

    • William Clapie

      wasn’t “practice” mentioned? at least in a subtle way? lmbo!
      DON’T want to see the practice area!

  • Spooky in the throes of passion and a very eager receiver of Kyle’s first blowjob is SO hot. Pretty sure Kyle agrees.

    Kyle is getting good time to explore, and has a ‘teacher’ ready to tell him what feels good. Amanda’s earlier fantasies about Spooky teaching good sex is not far off. This is just a little more hand (and mouth) on than a classroom lesson 🙂

  • hot

  • John

    Y’know, using my imagination here is, in some ways, way more satisfying.

    After all, in that last panel I can have them doing whatever I want 😀

    • Biippa

      Ikr?! It’s like.. Hmm, which is better, a bj or rimming, or maybe Kyle is just smooching his thighs? Who knows, but my mind is running away with me on this hahaa

      • Madock345

        A chaste foot massage between buds.

      • John

        Mine too! Appendages in every direction 😀

      • William Clapie

        Ya’ know, sometimes a great muscle rub is fantastic! Especially on a day after fighting those sneaky ninjas!

  • Megan Staples

    Hi Alex. I’m leaving this message here because my email is funky. I have to stop donating. I love Y911 and TYP and always will, but for the time being I have to stop being a patron. My dad died and financials are tight. I will still read, never fear!

    • I’m very sorry to hear about your loss, Megan. Of course, I understand. Please take care of yourself. I lost my Dad last year and it was one of the hardest things in my life. Please let me know if there is anything I can do.

      • Megan Staples

        Thanks Alex. You’re a good man.

      • William Clapie

        Hadn’t heard or I forgot, sorry about that Alex. I know the pain all too well. I was pall bearer for my uncle on the day of my mothers funeral. Two years later my dad died just before my wife to be bridal shower. So my man. We swallow the hurt cherish all the good memories and we move on. The sunny days are still there.
        Bless you Alex. You may go ahead and pull this statement if you like. Even with my new fish icon, I am still a pastor.

    • Sorry for your loss Megan. *hugs*

      • Megan Staples

        Thank *hugs back*

    • Klaus

      That is hard. Financial trouble on top of a great grief. I hope you will be allright eventually.

    • My condolences for your loss.

      • Megan Staples

        Thamkn you.

    • William Clapie

      Sorry for your loss, may he rest well,

      Pastor Bill

      • Megan Staples

        Namaste.

      • Megan Staples

        The days of sun are hard to enjoy , but I know they will be again.

    • Kate G

      I’m so sorry for your loss, Megan. I remember how it feels to lose someone close. Take your time and we’re always hear to listen.

      • Megan Staples

        Thanks.

    • So sorry for your loss. Deepest sympathies.

      • Megan Staples

        Thank you.

  • Toli Bera

    What’s going on Behind The Black: Kyle is looking for Spooky’s keys. and spooky is playing hot & cold to help him find them.

  • Ishvaara

    I wish I could spare the extra to be a patron! I’m ordering Legendary in paperback as well! These scenes alone make it worthwhile!

  • Chris Dangerfield

    So often, in Spooky’s position (so to speak), our expressions are so lovably goofy. It just figures that Spooky (in panel #1) is gorgeous and you can completely feel what the does — or at least recognize that moment in yourself.

    I love and feel both of them on this page.

    Spooky is beautiful here for his confidence and freedom to let go of any personal concerns and apppreciate the moment with Kyle fully… exactly as we all would wish to (and sometimes we can when we feel safe and desired, and sometimes it’s hard to relax and let go because we’re not sure of our partner).

    Kyle is wonderful for his focus and his obvious relish in engaging Spooky as we know he has wanted to… for so long. This is a page I can remember living and loving. These connections happen, but far less than most of us probably wish.

    Sex is easy. Sex with love, affection and friendship is much harder to find. Excuse me, I’m obviously speaking so much for myself.

    Thank you Alex, Julie and Vero. Once again you capture the heart of something special within a moment that is so often soulless porn. Super giant bravo(a). Love it.

    • You’re very welcome, Chris. So much fun to read another one of your play-by-plays. They’ve been missed. 🙂

    • Klaus

      Chris! It is so good to see you again.

    • davefragments

      I hope you are safe from those wildfires

  • Mage of Pisces

    If I were to become a $5 patron now (as I can now afford it), would I be able to go see all the previous $5 rewards such as the uncensored pages?

    • While I remove NSFW pin-ups after a couple months (thus, the ones I’ve removed would be unavailable to see until I repost them again in a “Flashback Friday” post), currently all the uncensored versions of these “Legendary” pages are still up.

      Hope that helps. Thank you very much for your interest in supporting our work here! 🙂

      • Biippa

        The NSFW is in the $5 rewards??? Hecc, as soon as my bank goes back to being positive, I’m gonna cancel my Pandora and just go to Patreon, it’s a dollar cheaper. I thought this stuff would be like… $10+ like what I usually see advertised by Patreon users.

        • $10+ pledges gets a high definition digital copy of the month’s ($5+) extra/pin-up (often NSFW) art that Alex post on Patreon sent to their email each month. It’s an extra large version of the art posted on Patreon. After a while Alex will remove the NSFW art from Patreon, but it may return for a period of time (after a while) as a Flashback Friday. Recently some of the old NSFW art has been resposted, so you can see it again.
          5+ pledge gives access to pretty much everything. 10+ and more gives some special extra treats.

          Except for a few posts, most of the prior posted art is up on Patreon to view when you want. This include things like each page’s lineart & script (gives extra insight on pages), special art posted only there + three (great) Spooky short stories that Alex wrote. You get a lot for $5 a month 🙂

  • davefragments

    Big Long Word that you will need tomorrow
    Paraskevidekatriaphobia
    Why you ask? Because it’s Friday and it’s the 13th.

    • Klaus

      Is there a medical term for fear of superstition?

      • davefragments

        The “Fear of Phobias” is Phobophobia
        Fear of Doctors is Iatrophobia

      • davefragments

        Also, Dishabillophobia is not the fear of dishes and sinks but the fear of undressing in front of someone.

        Neither Spooky nor Kyle have that fear because the lights are on.

    • And it’s currently my last day at work tomorrow. Will it be a nice last day, or one with horrors? *dun dun duuun*

      • davefragments

        The fateful Friday — ooooh, scary time

    • Klaus

      The 13th of a month is more often a Friday than any other day of the week.

    • Saxon_Brenton

      Huh, I hadn’t heard of the word before. I had always used either ‘friggatriskaidekaphobia’ or ‘triskaidekafriggaphobia’.

      • davefragments

        I’m putting them on my list for the next Friday the 13th

    • D. G.

      Thanks doki.

  • D. G.

    Spooky looks very sexy here. Whatever Kyle is doing, he’s good at it.

  • Happy Friday the 13th!!

  • davefragments

    Hello Campers,
    Has your day been spooky enough? I hope we get to see lots of Spooky on this aptly numeric Friday.

    • Kinda tired. Not getting the writing I want in, but with the dumpster fire that is 2017, any writing is good writing?

      • davefragments

        I finished a big edit last night about 1am.
        The story went from 4500 words to 6300 which was hard work for me. Usually my edits go the other way with word count.

        • I’ve been having a hard time just getting motivated to write. And staying up beyond 11:30 is nigh impossible since Penny came into my life (almost a year ago). It doesn’t matter if it’s light or dark out, she wants to get up at 6. Just once, just once I’d like to sleep in.

          • davefragments

            I know the feeling. I used to have a 10 lb yorkie. He was such a bad little boy, faithful, fun but his name should have been piddles. My brother and his wife want to give me a cat but I’m not a cat person.

          • Penny’s a pretty good girl, other than wanting to get up at stupid o’clock in the morning and hogging the bed. Been house trained since I got her. She just has this one rotten habit.

            She does have some incontinence issues, mostly when she’s in a full sleep, because she was spayed at 3 months (not my doing, I got her at 6 months. Don’t spay your dogs before 6 months people, so many troubles can arise from it.). So I watch her diet (I cook for her), make certain she’s been out right before bed. It’s also another reason when she wants to get up, we get up. Though since it’s still dark out, I cheat and go back to bed until it’s light out. Ha!

          • Kate G

            What kind of puppy do you have?

          • The shelter had her down as a Heeler/Shepard mix. But I suspect she has some hound in her. The way she barks, it’s more of a barooo at times, and how she’s built, the fact she’s short haired.

            http://admiraljane.tumblr.com/search/my+puppy

          • Kate G

            She looks like she has some sort of terrier in her over a Shepherd (but then, trying to guess mutts is a great guessing game.) My Zena has great big giant ears like Penny.

            Here’s a picture of Zena for comparison, ear wise.
            https://scontent-ort2-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.0-9/21032335_10210194046104660_1706983097839551837_n.jpg?oh=0fbe9e83fdfc81525442f776c157a197&oe=5A857B60

          • She’s so cute.

            Penny’s ears can’t decide what they want to do. Sometimes they’re up, sometimes they’re down, sometimes it’s a mix. When we first brought her home we thought she might have some Basenji in her, but she’s a little big for that. She’s 24in last I measured her.

            If I had the extra $$ I’d do a DNA test on her in an instant.

          • Kate G

            Zena is, well, it’s interesting. When we got her, she was considered a Decker Rat Terrier, which were also called Giant Rat Terriers. Since then the AKC has made the Rat Terrier an “official breed”…but only mini Rat Terriers and Standard Rat Terriers classify. Since then, those who breed Zena’s type have been trying to make her size an entirely new breed called the Decker Hunting Terrier. Deckers are predominantly Rat Terriers, but they have a smidge of Fox Terrier and Basenji in them (Ratties also have Fox Terrier, but no Basenji.)

            Zena is a bit smaller than Penny and on the smaller side for Deckers. She stands at 17” at the withers and weighs right now at 29 pounds. We’ve been keeping her at the lighter end of her range to stave off arthritis because she’s 13. We’ve had her ten years so it’s hard to think of her as old!

          • They are always our puppies no matter their age. I’ve heard of the Deckers, but only through a blog about Basenjis.

            I found the pictures to the day we brought Penny home. She truly has grown so much. She was 32/33 pounds when we first got her, she’s now around 55 and that harness no longer fits.

            http://admiraljane.tumblr.com/post/152583446918/its-been-a-little-over-two-weeks-since-i-lost-my

          • Kate G

            Penny has gotten large; I can tell from the photos!

            The largest and heaviest I have owned was a Greyhound named Porsche (she CAME with that name! We rescued her.) She topped at 66 pounds. I’d love to own a Grey again, but she was just so special. I was really heartbroken when we let her go to heaven. It’s kind of one of those, “I’d love to, but I’m afraid I’ll compare every dog to my old one.” She was truly this special dog. I called her Pork Chops. XD

          • davefragments

            I fed my dog dry food and one day when I was eating chicken wings from the Chinese Take-Out, a slippery little chicken wing smothered in soy sauce popped out of my fingers and it never hit the floor. Years later I found the bone hidden under an overstuffed chair.

          • Hahahaha! Dogs are so ridiculous. I love them so much.

          • davefragments

            As for writing, I used to turn out almost a short story a month. I got depressed and stopped. Cured that and I’m taking all the unpublished stories hidden on my computer and getting the ready to post on my website starting on Halloween.

            And, I just went back to the story and searched for the word “but.” Over two dozen occurrences are now down to 8. Using “but” is a bad habit of mine.

          • I think I over use “that”.

            Things have been a little tight here. Stressful too. And with the never ending shitstorm that is this presidency, it doesn’t help. Plus we’ve started a new business so that too. I keep trying to get some work in. But there are fits and starts. Sometimes there’s a bunch, sometime it’s just a sentence.

          • davefragments

            I have a friend near Santa Rosa and his house burnt. Him and his wife are safe.

            I turn off the news so I don’t get that screamingly angry about it. That chaos can be all consuming.

          • I try very hard to avoid politics, but it’s everywhere. And with all these disasters… It’s just so heartbreaking. And then and then and then… I need to try harder to avoid so much bad news, but at the same time I don’t want to not know and be unaware. It’s… There are no words

          • davefragments

            yes, it is counterproductive to be constantly angry

          • So very counterproductive.

    • Kate G

      It is Friday the 13th isn’t it? Boy, I hope the ponies and horses didn’t cause a ruckus at the barn today. Thank God it’s not a full moon on top of being Friday the 13th, eh? HA HA HA HA HA, oh many, my poor coaches would be going crazy.

      My auntie came into town today and got a tour of our new house! I’m still trying to get down my dressage pattern. So. Many. Steps.

      • davefragments

        Sounds like a good day for you.
        I went food shopping. Mundane is good.

        • Kate G

          If you count having bring woken up at 10 am okay! [when you’re a night owl!] It was great to see her, but I was so sleepy! Like, can you come over in the afternoon? She’s one of the chirpy morning birds though and I’m all, “Wake me up after 1 PM please?” and I need Dr. Pepper to feel fully alive. XDDDD

          • davefragments

            I have a note near my doorbell that says “Don’t bother. Come back after 12:30pm”

          • Kate G

            HA HA HA HA HA HA HA. That’s great. My dad is an early bird, my mom is an afternoon person and there’s me the night owl. Someone is always awake in this house which is why I’m still struggling to understand why my dad got a fancy security system that pisses me off. (I regularly set it off so I hear, “Disarm the security!” You have exactly 30 seconds to punch in the code before the police is called. Never have I run faster to a panel in my life.) SOMEONE IS AWAKE ALWAYS! Why have a security system?! I’ve never gotten madder at a panel in my life!

    • Madock345

      Pretty spooky. I think the date cursed me bad. I completely missed my class today because my bus was like 20 minutes late and took 40 minutes to complete a 10 minute route. So many problems. And then walmart was out of at least one ingredient for every meal I have planned for the next week. What is ratatouille without eggplant? Or chicken lettuce wraps without green onion? Spaghetti with no Basil‽

      • davefragments

        I make the best red sauce with rigatoni and meat balls, ever, for all time, the absolute best…
        “no basil” gasp! horror!
        😉

      • Squishy

        I call ratatouille without eggplant an improvement! XP

  • Page should be up soon. 🙂

  • Bei Dawei

    So…what base will Archie and Jughead get to today? And will we catch a glimpse of Hot Dog?

  • davefragments
  • More Kissing! (Please.)

  • bandanajack

    you can shoot me for saying so, but i am ready to get back to the flying and hero business. i have cable tv, super sexual situations are, for me, redundant. more swashbuckling teens, please. cool uniforms are great too.

    actually, it is kind of a field day for me on tv and in films. superheroes and aliens every way you turn. real life may be a ball of pain for me right now, but at least i have some things to smile about. and star trek discovery has an interracial gay couple front and center, and the orville has a super horny blob pursuing various females of any species, and a married pair of mineral based life forms on the crew roster… diversity rules.