Read transcripts of this page in different languages:

PANEL 1:

A) ANNIHILATOR: AH! EXCELLENT! SO YOU TWO HAVE MET.

B) KYLE: NO. SPOOKY'S JUST, UM, TOLD ME ABOUT HER...

PANEL 2:

C) PRIESTESS: ALL GOOD THINGS, I TRUST.

PANEL 3:

D) KYLE: NOT REALLY...

PANEL 4:

E) ANNIHILATOR: THEN PERHAPS YOU'LL BE WILLING TO FORM YOUR OWN OPINION.

F) ANNIHILATOR: SIRCEA WILL BE PROVIDING US WITH TRANSPORTATION TO THE FAR EAST.

PANEL 5:

G) ANNIHILATOR: THAT IS, IF YOU'RE STILL INTERESTED, OF COURSE.

H) KYLE: DO I ACTUALLY HAVE A CHOICE?

English transcript submitted by Alex Woolfson on

CASE 1:
A) ANNIHILATOR: Ah ! Formidable ! Donc vous vous connaissez déjà.
B) KYLE: Non. Spooky m'a juste, hum, parlé d'elle.
CASE 2:
C) PRIESTESS: Que des bonnes choses, j'imagine.
CASE 3:
D) KYLE: Pas vraiment...
CASE 4:
E) ANNIHILATOR: Alors peut-être que tu voudras te forger ta propre opinion.
F) ANNIHILATOR: Sircea va nous fournir le moyen de transport vers l'Extrême Orient.
CASE 5:
G) ANNIHILATOR: Enfin, si tu es toujours intéressé, bien sûr.
H) KYLE: J'ai vraiment le choix ?

French transcript submitted by LuthiHeidi on

Panel 1
A) Annihilator: Ah! Exzellent! Ihr beiden kennt euch.
B) Kyle: Nein. Spooky hat mir nur, ähm, von ihr erzählt...
Panel 2
C) Priestess: Nur Gutes, nehme ich an.
Panel 3
D) Kyle: Nicht wirklich...
Panel 4
E) Annihilator: Nun, vielleicht wärst du gewillt, dir deine eigene Meinung zu bilden.
F) Annihilator: Sircea wird uns ein Beförderungsmittel in den fernen Osten zur Verfügung stellen.
Panel 5
G) Annihilator: Das heißt, falls du noch interessiert bist, natürlich.
H) Kyle: Habe ich überhaupt eine Wahl?

German transcript submitted by ckazka on

PANEL 1:
A) ANNIHILATOR: AH! UTMERKET! DERE HAR MØTT HVERANDRE.
B) KYLE: NEI. SPOOKY HAR, ØH, FORTALT MEG OM HENNE...
PANEL 2:
C) PRIESTESS: BARE POSITIVE TING, HÅPER JEG.
PANEL 3:
D) KYLE: IKKE EGENTLIG...
PANEL 4:
E) ANNIHILATOR: DA VIL DU KANSKJE VÆRE VILLIG TIL Å FORME DIN EGEN MENING.
F) ANNIHILATOR: SIRCEA VIL TA HÅND OM TRANSPORTERINGEN TIL DET FJERNE ØSTEN.
PANEL 5:
G) ANNIHILATOR: DET VIL SI, HVIS DU FORTSATT ER INTERESSERT, SELVFØLGELIG.
H) KYLE: HAR JEG EGENTLIG ET VALG?

Norwegian transcript submitted by seth on

PANEL 1:
A) ANNIHILATOR: AH! DOSKONALE! ZATEM JUŻ SIĘ ZNACIE.
B) KYLE: NIE. SPOOKY TYLKO, UM, OPOWIADAŁ MI O NIEJ...
PANEL 1:
C) PRIESTESS: SAME DOBRE RZECZY, JAK MNIEMAM.
PANEL 1:
D) KYLE: TAK NAPRAWDĘ TO NIE...
PANEL 1:
E) ANNIHILATOR: WIĘC MOŻE ZECHCESZ WYROBIC SOBIE WŁASNĄ OPINIĘ.
F) ANNIHILATOR: SIRCEA ZAŁATWI NAM TRANSPORT NA DALEKI WSCHÓD.
PANEL 1:
G) ANNIHILATOR: TO ZNACZY, JEŚLI NADAL JESTEŚ ZAINTERESOWANY, OCZYWIŚCIE.
H) KYLE: CZY JA WŁAŚCIWIE MAM JAKIŚ WYBÓR?

Polish transcript submitted by Tasharene on

Quadro 1
A) Annihilator: Ah, excelente! Então vocês já se conhecem.
B) Kyle: Não. O Spooky só, ahm, me falou sobre ela.

Quadro 2
C) Priestess: Apenas coisas boas, acredito.

Quadro 3
D) Kyle: Na verdade não...

Quadro 4
E) Annihilator: Então talvez você queira formar sua própria opinião.
F) Annihilator: Sircea vai prover nosso transporte para o oriente.

Quadro 5
G) Annihilator: Isso, se você ainda estiver interessado, claro.
H) Kyle: Eu tenho escolha?

Portuguese transcript submitted by Hazy on

PANEL 1:

A) ANNIHILATOR: ¡AH! ¡EXCELENTE! ASÍ QUE YA SE CONOCEN.

B) KYLE: NO. SPOOKY SOLO, UM, ME HABLO DE ELLA...

PANEL 2:

C) PRIESTESS: TODAS COSAS BUENAS, ESPERO.

PANEL 3:

D) KYLE: NO REALMENTE...

PANEL 4:

E) ANNIHILATOR: ENTONCES QUIZÁS ESTARÍAS DISPUESTO A FORMAR TU PROPIA OPINIÓN.

F) ANNIHILATOR: SIRCEA ESTARÁ PROPORCIONÁNDONOS TRANSPORTE AL LEJANO ORIENTE.

PANEL 5:

G) ANNIHILATOR: ES DECIR, SI TODAVÍA ESTAS INTERESADO, POR SUPUESTO.

H) KYLE: ¿EN REALIDAD TENGO ALGUNA OPCIÓN?

Spanish transcript submitted by Powell on

The Young Protectors: Engaging The Enemy Chapter One—Page 15

A fair question, seeing as Kyle’s only exit is blocked by a huge, magical gateway…

(Man, I just love the expressions on The Annihilator’s face when Kyle isn’t looking. How can anyone who gazes into those soft, gentle eyes in Panel One not trust this man with all their heart?)

We have some new, very pretty Fan Art from Prince of Cats creator, Kori Michele. It’s a sweet, tender moment between Kyle and The Annihilator that was created with brush pen and watercolors direct on sketch. You must check it out.

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  • DoktorNauk

    I wonder why the next button isn’t showing on page 13? Kyle is right to be feeling ganged up on. Now I’m really curious as to why Spook’s in particular knows about her.

    • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_4DLOB4FUGXCGAVWL4ENV5G2NOM Vincent

      All magic users know eachother. Just don’t say that around them, it’s offensive for some reason.

      • http://www.facebook.com/joseph.a.murphy.39 Joseph Alan Murphy

         Why would it be offensive if it’s the truth. Though I guess to them ‘knowing’ someone must mean that you’re friends with them or something…

        • http://twitter.com/balisane Sola Balisane

           I guess there’s only so many people out there on the ~astral plane~ for you to bump into. 

      • http://www.facebook.com/jay.demetrick Jay Demetrick

        First rule of Magic Club: Don’t talk about Magic Club…

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Most browsers use caching so sometimes you have to force-refresh a a page (Cntl-R on Windows, Cmd-R on Macs) to get a page to update. That’s what I have to do anyway. :)

  • Syreen

    Oh my, I love this woman! :-D

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_ODTYRNLPDTIZWUVMJBCDAFY27E DivaLady

    Kyle’s acting a little childish, I think.  You know the guy’s a villain, and you get in a tizzy when he associates with villains?  Bright.  Not.

    • http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1020233372 Mykle Breakfield

       I agree, but I’m wondering if it’s the fact she’s a villain, or the fact he’s brought in an “outsider” who has to obviously know of Kyle’s orientation? 

      • http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1057073414 Tina Barron

         I think it’s both. He’s young, full of righteous integrity, AND aware that this is one more person (another “baddie”) who knows his secret.  Oh, The Teenage Angst. I can’t wait to see his world view shift (and probably shift again and again….).

        • Kit the Coyote

          True but on the other paw, if he has any sense of self preservation the probably a little voice somewhere in his subconscious pointing out he is now out numbered by the bad guys about to swept off to who knows where. 

          • http://www.facebook.com/jay.demetrick Jay Demetrick

            He knew he was “outnumbered” when it was just Annihilator!  lol!

      • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_ODTYRNLPDTIZWUVMJBCDAFY27E DivaLady

        I didn’t think of that.  I look forward to seeing if that question gets answered.

  • http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=1020233372 Mykle Breakfield

    Hee hee hee, I love Priestess even more, although the front of the costume kinda kills my remarks on the last page.  Double sided sticky tape again!  Still, I like the outfit.  “All good things, I trust” indeed.  lol.  I assumed Spooks would know of her, since both seem to have magic-based powers.  And even though Kyle seems to literally be backed into a corner, I still think Anni would let him leave.  I still think the only real villainous plan he has for Kyle is to eventually sleep with him, and really, that’s not too villainous for a gay man.   Besides, he just gave away her real name…is that standard fare these days? I’m also wondering if Kyle is slowly picking up on the fact that Anni is also trying to get him to see the world isn’t as black and white as he seems to think it is…the folly of youth? lol.

  • Monica

    Alex, I have no idea what you are talking about! I mean that old slick man is just so handsome and everything you can ask for!  Those eyes just tells you that he can give you some intense  tension in the bed, and that he probably is awesome bedroom role-player! 8D

  • AlexandraSwiss

    Kyle’s reaction to the Priestess reminds me of Mr. Green in Clue the Movie when Evette asks if anyone will go with her in the dark.
    P. Plum: I will!
    G. Custard: I WILL!
    M. Green: No, thank you. 

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_4DLOB4FUGXCGAVWL4ENV5G2NOM Vincent

    Burn the witch!
    She turned me into a pig!

    I got better…
    (Monty Python plus a Circe reference? Circe~Sircea? Enchantress that turned people into pigs? No one? Aww, ok.)

    • Travis

      I got it and literally laughed out loud thus scaring my cat to stick herclaws in me and run

    • ithilloke

      Um, I think it’s newt, actually…;-)

      • http://www.facebook.com/people/Carol-Gravley/100000456468461 Carol Gravley

        It IS a newt in Monty Python, but the Classical mythological reference points toward Circe, the witch who turned people into pigs.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      I am impressed by your references.

  • http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=591482984 Deejay Mumin

    All this for dinner. Wow!

  • Yukiness

    Anni’s face in panel one is just too much. I do love how Plantinum Prietstess is only half animated in panel two as her legs are smoke. Things like that make my fangirl dial spin out of control. Another thing that has me drawnn to it like a hopeless moth is the texture of the bricks in the background. I have not seen more artistically rendered brick wall like that in a very long time. Hats off to you Adam and Veronica.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Yes, the bricks! Both Adam and I were over the moon when Vero sent us this page. I’m glad you like them too!

  • ithilloke

    Hmmmmmmmm, seems like Kyle’s hanging out with a bunch of friends who are a tad narrow-minded. These two seem like they’d be quite handy to know!

    • http://twitter.com/balisane Sola Balisane

       I know, right?  With friends like these, who needs… anything really.  Not even a bus pass.  xD

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_OXPDZNZ3FTN6UW4AS7F33Q4U4U AeryonSun

    First panel = Kyle’s looking really handsome! I never really saw him as handsome until this page. Third panel = Sircea’s adorable look of annoyance.

    Of course you have a choice Kyle! I really don’t think Anni will try to kidnap you, I’m pretty sure he wants you all eager and willing…but you know you’re gonna say yes anyway. Your curiosity is gonna be your downfall! Or a really wonderful gateway into finally having awesome man-sex lol!

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/David-Boccabella/100000739257449 David Boccabella

    Kyle is becoming more and more like a pouting child and I do hope that he gets over that soon.

    Love the Priestess ‘Darlek Bumps’  – they certainly do look to be very very firm!!!

    (10 points for anyone picking up THAT reference)

    • Thomas Hamilton

      yay i get 10 points….too bad there isn’t a fez or a blue box lying around somewhere LOL 

    • Kit the Coyote

       Dalek bumps, style and low rise platinum under/outerwear who could ask for anything more. :)

    • http://www.facebook.com/jay.demetrick Jay Demetrick

      Gasp!  Not The Curse of Fatal Death!  lol!

    • Soitgoesgirl

      It is YOU who deserves points for that reference!

  • Thomas Hamilton

    i can’t wait for the next page ^_^

  • Kit the Coyote

    I do so love villains with style and class.   The think is at this point if I was Kyle I would begin to suspect that this is an attempt to seduce….ahhhh errm recruit me to the ‘dark side’ hehe.

  • Erica

    oh god, when TPP was all “All good things…” i was like… uh…. did they do it? XD But then Kyle said no. So i was like PHEW ok…. Unless Spooky’s just hiding something!! D: D: AH! that’ll be scary…. >_O lol N e way, seeing how TPP isn’t hindering this relationship….. then GO HER. >:U lol Go to the dinner Kyle! Anni’s legs btw… ermergerd, they look amazing in those slacks. lol  I woulda laughed if his junk was visible lmao, not as an erection mind you. >w> hehehe… Anni, by Kyle some clothes for goodness sake. XDD

  • Kit the Coyote

    Sircea  does seem a bit miffed that Kyle didn’t kiss her hand hehe.

  • SomeoneK

    Are The Big guy and the stunning lady reated or something? Both so cool, epic and well, something about the colour scheme is pretty similar :’D

  • Lady Mania

    LOL that look on Sircea’s face when Kyle doesn’t kiss her hand. The expressions in all the panels, 1 and 5 especially, I just love. Anni is a very expressive man when you aren’t looking.

  • http://www.facebook.com/DaddyDemon2010 Suzie Simonds

    I love how Kyle says “Do I actually have a choice?” Oh he has a choice… He just wants to go on that date with Anni! ;D

  • Madisuzy

    LOL!  Soft, gentle eyes indeed!  You have to love a deviant super-villian!  I loved the art in the last panel.  The 3D effect of it really caught my eye.  Then again, the art is always spectacular in this comic.  I’m loving the storyline so far too and getting a lot of giggles.

  • http://twitter.com/Its_me_Alis Alis~~

    Hey hey Kyle! Be courteous to the lady, okay? She may be a super villain, but she’s class and style. Be nice!
    (nomnom reading this page while eating maria-mole¹. that’s true bliss *–*)http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maria-mole

  • http://www.facebook.com/Grim.Sister Moore Hesse

    Now, HR, Be nice to the sexy lady. 
    She knows both your secret identety and the fact that you’re gay. Don’t make her wanna spill the beans. 
    Also, she’s pretty hot. :P

  • fujoshifanatic

    So stoked! Reading this awesome page on my layover to YaoiCon (found a way to go after all! :-D) Might even make it in time for your second panel today, Alex! 

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      So good to finally meet you, fujoshifanatic. Glad you could make it! :D

      (And I very much enjoyed the truffles. Thank you! :D)

  • Eimile

    Sircea’s hair is just gorgeous. <3  And I love how elegant she is, even in such a revealing outfit.  Much love!

  • http://www.facebook.com/Yukiro.Fayt Dawnie Louise Fackrell

    Of course you have a choice dear… it’s just that we all know you’ll go anyway, even if every fiber of your soul tells you its a bad idea. :3 Hehehehe.

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Jordan-Sims/100001524926635 Jordan Sims

    Thinking out loud, but isn’t it a bad thing that he’s easily recognized?

    • http://www.facebook.com/jay.demetrick Jay Demetrick

      I’m sure Annihilator told Platinum Priestess that he was picking up Red Hot for a date. It’s not like she knows his name.

      Thing is, now two “villains” have seen his face without his mask.  Worrying…

  • Chester

    I am curious to know what Kyle is like in school. That is, assuming he’s still in school. Might there be a scene in the future of him in his classes/with classmates?

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      I won’t rule anything out, but there aren’t any plans for such a scene right now. :)

      • Chester

        Okay, then. Thank you for replying, Alex!

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_J7W4JMZ6MXCVA6KKCFVAMW44OU Summer

    Good lord, Plat-Pre is TALL.  She’s so pretty!  Also, i have no idea how her top is staying on, and it’s hilariously awesome.  Also, Kyle, for God’s sakes, show some manners.  Your folks should hopefully have taught you how to act in the presence of distinguished individuals.

    Also…maybe it’s not such a good thing you’re easily recognized?  Your hair is indeed lovely; I really am a sucker for redheads.  However, that might not be such a good thing if you’re trying to maintain a secret identity.  I don’t even know why I’m saying this, since you certainly put more effort into your “mundane” disguise than Clark Kent did, but yeah…

    • http://www.facebook.com/jay.demetrick Jay Demetrick

      Her top is magic.  ;)

      • Leigh Nelson

        I wish I had magic clothes! Maybe then I could have breasts like Preistess, I bet THAT’S her trick! AHAH!

    • http://twitter.com/balisane Sola Balisane

       I suspect her top has shoulder straps, judging by the way the cape is attached. 

      Red’s about as difficult to spot as a kangaroo in a daycare. 

      • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

        Red’s about as difficult to spot as a kangaroo in a daycare.

        Ha!

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Shawn-Skipper/100000309546517 Shawn Skipper

    Do you have a choice?
    I say nay.

  • ShelbySora

    omgosh The Annihilator’s face in the first panel, it is too beautiful! <3

  • http://cathcer1984.dreamwidth.org/ Cathcer

    Kyle’s such a cute snob!

  • KiannaLeigh

    Oh Kyle. You’re finally wising up. ^_^ I’m proud of you.

  • CommodoreZelda

    I am totally a fan of the Priestess. She’s just so glamorous. All her body language. She’s just awesome.

    Oh, Kyle, don’t chicken out now. Be a man. <3

  • Ikaru Sentinal-K’Valshar

    Lol. Her expression when Kyle did not kiss her hand. Snubbed. Kyles all like…only men will I kiss.

  • http://twitter.com/balisane Sola Balisane

    Oh, Kyle.  You are offered an opportunity to be smooth,  and you completely fail it.  Or is it that you prefer to be the one being treated like a lay-dee? xD 

    A good thing, ‘cos YOU GON’ GET WINED AND DINED~

  • xxkentuskixx

    You didn’t know, Red Hot? Platinum Priestess’s super power is credit card and you get reward travel points!

    • Yukiness

      This comment wins all the free internets

    • Antenn0

       This.

  • Dee Dee

    Kyle, so quick to be judgemental, are we? “You’re evil because my friend said so.” “Anyone who associates with Annihilator is evil.” 

    And also, you DO have a choice, Kyle! Just say no firmly and walk away. You’re behaving like they’re gonna blow your head off just for a simple refusal. Yet, I do think Anni’s gonna take advantage of his indecision. =D

    • Soitgoesgirl

      It’s funny, right?
      He’s ‘associating’ more and more with Anni each page yet he still insists on being the pure hero. But come on, he knows Spooky better than he does the PLATINUM PRIESTESS. Would you believe the half-naked chick with smoke for legs who is friends with the super villain who kinda-sorta made you make out with him, or your own magical Asian friend?
      …He’s still just a boy.
      Of course Anni will take advantage of that.
      Smoothly and sexily.

  • QuantumKid

    GASP! A woman!! D: 

  • sSparrowW

    Sircea… Am I the only one who adores the name? Even though we’ve known her for two pages, I feel like it fits the Platinum Priestess perfectly. Not to mention she’s totally gorgeous, hehe. While man-on-man wins easily, a good looking woman is always appreciated ;)

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      I’m glad you like the name… and a good looking woman. ;)

  • http://twitter.com/hinakiba777 Holly

    This whole page screams “Kyles doesn’t like boobs. The presence of boobs distracts him from gushing over Anni. Ucky Boob=Rational Thought time.”

    Especially the final panel, the expression on Kyle’s face says it all. It didn’t care about having a choice before, but he’s all uppity NOW! Because boobs are ucky!

    Panel two= UGH, IT TOUCHED ME!

    XD Can’t wait for the new page next week.

  • http://the-tribulations-of-rex.blogspot.com/ ℜεx GαηчMε∂ε. (Super Hero.)

    the best thing about this comic’s tv trope’s page is, there almost certainly can be no spoilers (for me) in it; so i’ll be reading that in a little while.

    the anticipation is killing me..
    ..how much material do you already have writ, alex?

    i wouldn’t be shocked if kyle himself “joins the dark side,” although obviously you can’t tell us that.
    (kyle’s already doing his best “george dubya `wah on terrah´” face in panel 1 so it’s not too far a stretch.)

    • saxonbrenton

      Actually, as a variation on that I wouldn’t be surprised if Anni were trying to ‘seduce’ him over to the Dark Side (“as my sidekick, Dark Red…”) and it was Kyle’s insistance that he wouldn’t betray his teammates that we saw back in the Prolog that kept him on the (relatively) staright-and-narrow among all his hormonal confusion. And as an aside, it would also be nice if Kyle were simultaneously trying to seduce Anni over to the Light Side – but honestly, I don’t think Kyle currently has the sophistication to tactics to be even thinking up a plan like that, let alone carrying it out…

      • http://the-tribulations-of-rex.blogspot.com/ ℜεx GαηчMε∂ε. (Super Hero.)

        that’s what makes this all so intriguing.

        l.o.l.

        kyle’s obviously not the brightest of the bunch, so that’s gonna be playing a factor in the story.

        it’s not even guaranteed anhi and sparky will consummate anything..
        ..the “focus” could suddenly shift to some other character, at the whim of the author.

        (maybe Tsunami will “get some action.”)

        • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

          When I read you comment, I couldn’t help thinking of this. :)

          • http://the-tribulations-of-rex.blogspot.com/ ℜεx GαηчMε∂ε. (Super Hero.)

            you know i had to find the extended version of this scene: i just got these new headphones, see — and they do a reasonable job of delivering a richer bass for my ears’ enjoyment.

            i happened to be wearing them when i had followed the link you’d supplied..
            ..thus the “boss music” which was playing at the end of the scene had sounded that much more awesome.

            (i’m charmed by the meshing of “proper brits” and “contemporary music.”)

            so, you’re akin to moriarty, kind sir?

      • http://the-tribulations-of-rex.blogspot.com/ ℜεx GαηчMε∂ε. (Super Hero.)

        :-).

        part of the biggest selling point of this story is for us to witness “how a force of evil (currently in name only) and a Doer of Good shall coëxist, while maintaining and upholding their respective roles.”

        it should be way waaaayyy into the story if either Flames or DILFer converts to “the other side.”
        i’m talking, “january 2014″ way waaaayyy.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      The whole 5 chapter story is completely outlined out and I’ve written scripts through the end of Chapter 3. Hope to finish up writing the last two chapters before the end of the year. :)

      • http://the-tribulations-of-rex.blogspot.com/ ℜεx GαηчMε∂ε. (Super Hero.)

        so this is going to be a long-term project, then.

        eep.

  • http://profile.yahoo.com/6HJDGXYGFH4NFNGGKRIFXKJZ6Q Daniele Roush

    I just found this Webcomic from an Ad and love it. Also can’t wait for more.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you—and welcome! :D

  • Lynn Autumn

    When is the time period for this comic? I have to tell you, I read all of artifice while it was still being uploaded and I’ve been with this from the beginning, i really love your comics. But this one has just made me a little curious as to the setting : )

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Different universe but based on present day North America (at least in terms of tech and society).

      Very glad to hear you’ve been enjoying my comics. Thank you for letting me know! :)

  • Interpolation

    I’m really curious what sort of stuff he has heard about these two.

  • TheWarriorQueen

    My power went out, and I only just got to see this, and now I’m looking at that LOOK in the first panel, and humming the yaoi-fan version of “Where have all the flowers gone.” (composed by me and a friend) Yep, this is awesome. And I love the Platinum Priestess’ outfit. It’s simultaneously fluid and angular, which uniquely complements her body shape. And that would only really make sense if you’ve done both poetry and art classes, but anyway… XD I’ve really gotten into webcomics lately, but this particular webcomic is one of the best. Wow. I keep scrolling up again to see our dear Annihilator’s final pose. “If you’re still interested…” Oh, come on Kyle, say yes!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      So glad that you are enjoying what you’re seeing here, TheWarriorQueen!

      (And with a name like that, is it possible that you have worked with The Platinum Priestess before?)

      • TheWarriorQueen

        I’d love to say that I have. Trouble is, she looks old enough to be my mother. And it’s unspoken teen-to-twenties mastermind law that we don’t work with anyone who could possibly know our parents. They might rat us out, and then we either get grounded, or if we’ve left home, we get phone-calls telling us that plotting to create force-fields that drive all mimes out the city is morally reprehensible, and mum will be along shortly to be sure we eat our vegetables, as that is the cure for all misdemeanours. (Yep, I put way too much thought into that statement. I may have to write a webcomic based off that premise…)

  • Gabriel Maia

    Amazing story, realy, realy loving it!
    A silly question tough…is there any reason why all the villains have silver hair?

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Yep. They have both reached an age that their hair has become silver.

      Glad you are enjoying the story! :)

      • CrispyChicks

         Woah, Platinum Priestess is good looking for her age. Same goes for the Annihilator. Attractive babies… <3

  • Colin bell

    Platinum Priestess’s face in panels 3 and 4 just scream “Well…fuck you too kid.”
    I love it <3 Though I have to say I love the Annihilator more. Come on Kyle give him a chance! He's attractive(I don't know if I like him in a suit better or in his costume…), nice(ish….I mean he IS taking you out to dinner in China.) to you , and your first kiss. So he is a bit older then you, your 17 meaning you will be 18 soon so there wont be much of an argument against it later anyways and besides you are a superhero, who knows when you might die, do you really have time to be picky about age? (plus older buff guys are HOT!)

  • Ayesha Agha

    why oh why does she have to be wearing that ridiculous highly sexual outfit? i’m not loving the message…

    • vyloran

       I guess I don’t understand why a woman can’t dress sexy if she wants to.  And yes I’m a woman and I guess I’m a bit of a feminist, but I don’t really have a problem with it.  Any woman who has the self esteem and confidence to put herself out there is a hero to me.

      • Shinashi

        Plus, she’s portrayed as sort of a villain (for now). Hot villains don’t go around trying to look practical or do practical things, or try their best not to be manipulating at every possible angle. 

        Where was the fuss for Anni’s outfit? 

        • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_J7W4JMZ6MXCVA6KKCFVAMW44OU Summer

          I think we may all have been too busy staring at his impressive bulge to say anything bad about his skin-tight tease of an outfit.

          In all seriousness, though, what a person chooses to wear does not define the person.  So sayeth “Three-Quarter Sleeve Woman.”

          • Colin bell

             Agreed! Though I’m not sure which of Anni’s outfits I like more….suits are hot as fuck.

            And as for PP’s costume I’d have to say that personally I don’t see the issue. Much like vyloran I think that women should be able to wear what they like and saying, not that any of us actually have said so, that something a person is wearing, whether male or female, is wrong or morally degrading to the gender in its self is degrading to the gender because each person is allowed to make their own choices. Whether they would like to abide by the sociological norm of what types of clothing is acceptable  to wear or not. And if someone chooses to dress promiscuously or not then that is their decision.

    • Feverfew_M

      That’s what I like about Alex’ work: he takes a cliché and turns it upside down. PP is probably way past 50 and still has not only a body worth showing off, but also the guts to do it. Says a lot about her personality, just as Commander’s more sensible outfit shows some of hers.

  • Ayesha Agha

    http://womenfighters.tumblr.com/ 
    try this for some better inspiration 

  • CommodoreZelda

    Camping!! Can’t wait to see Anni’s hurt/shocked response to Kyle’s question. And then Kyle will be guilted into going with the smexy bad guy. <3

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_J7W4JMZ6MXCVA6KKCFVAMW44OU Summer

    First time in ages; CAMPING!  I am totally excited!  I wanna see the stargate in action!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      The new page will be up in just a few minutes. :)

      • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_J7W4JMZ6MXCVA6KKCFVAMW44OU Summer

        :D :D :D  YAY!

  • DarkFeanix21

    I actually scrolled back up to the top of the page to see these so-called “soft, gentle eyes” and then I cracked up. I really enjoy your post-comic quips.

  • SolrSurfr3

    My God, she is GORGEOUS!! I mean, I came here for the guys, but I think I just got a lady-crush on Platinum Priestess. 0_o

  • Ree

    “Man, I just love the expressions on The Annihilator’s face when Kyle isn’t looking” – EXACTLY WHAT I ALWAYS THING. He’s so devilish. He cracks me up.

  • SuckerForCheesyRomance

    I want to put a voice to her but i can’t think of anyone good… any ideas?

    Anni still has the voice of Sean Connery to me.

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