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PANEL 3:

A) DEACON: THE RETRIEVAL OPERATIVES WERE GOING TO KILL HIM AND I...

PANEL 4:

B) DEACON: I COULDN'T LET THAT HAPPEN.

English transcript submitted by Alex Woolfson on

PANEL 3

A) DEACON: DIE MITGLIEDER DES RETTUNGSTEAMS HÄTTEN IHN GETÖTET UND ICH...

PANEL 4

B) DEACON: ICH KONNTE DAS NICHT ZULASSEN.

German transcript submitted by ckazka on

Quadro 3

A)Deacon: Os agentes de recuperação iam matá-lo e eu...

Quadro 4

B)Deacon: Eu não podia deixar isso acontecer.

Portuguese transcript submitted by Naya Yukida on

Artifice Page 61

Of course you couldn’t, Deacon.

We have special CHRISTMAS Fan Art by Artifice SuperFriend, Aikka. It involves more of her cute PaperChildren and thus is awesome. Yaoi Santa says check it out!

Speaking of checking things out, Artifice got a very nice review at GEEKALITARIAN – Women in Geek Culture.

And… if you haven’t started reading it already, you must, must, must check out Minor Acts of Heroism. It’s not yaoi (although it’s definitely “yaoi-aware”)—it’s just a really good time. Good art and great writing with engaging, well defined characters and truly witty dialogue. Just go read it. You won’t be disappointed. :)

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  • AnyOtaku

    Deacon you’re my hero!

    • Ayella

      Alex, you’re mine!

      • AnyOtaku

        Well, of course him too!

        • Ayella

          Hihihi

          • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

            Thanks, you two! ::blush::

  • Hyperminimalism

    I imagine Dr. Maven in some bondage with a whip and Deacon looking up at her, spitting out the muffled ‘safety’ word.  xD  Poor Deacon!  He just needs high-fives.

  • melinda stumpf

    Well the doc is making think of her as a dominatrix when looking at Deacon like that and Marry Christmas Alex!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. She knows how to use her power. :)

      Merry Christmas to you too, Melinda!

  • http://twitter.com/Saknika Samantha Genier

    I’m a long time reader of MAOH, so seeing the plug here is EXCITING!!! <3

    Love the fanart too, so cute! *0* <3 <3 <3

    And man… Deacon's face in the last panel is powerful. It's like he loses his fear of the doc when it comes down to the fact that he cared enough for Jeff to kill to save his life. That's pretty interesting.

    • Aikka

      Thank you! *–*

    • http://twitter.com/xBriarRosex Amberella Kissafella

      Yesssssss.  But what I want to know is…. Where is Jeff now????

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/War-Apocalypsewriters/100002216515410 War Apocalypsewriters

    Smug look she has. She knew. SHE KNEW! She’s just doing her job and making him say it.  I am wondering. Obviously Deacon going this far is, from a scientific stand point, amazing.

    He’s feeling and acting in ways that lead one to believe that his programing has evolved in unforeseen ways. Is this a good thing because it means his programing/programers are awesome or is this a bad thing because now he indeed acting in ways that would lead to a debate on how ‘human’ this inhuman machine is now. Is he going to be taken a part for science or taken apart as a defect?

    • http://profiles.google.com/ninelegyak Alan Williams

      Of course she already knew. Instead of being “surprised” at how “human” he is, the way I see it is that the humans in this comic are just trying to keep control.

  • Superjenny

    Ohh…  Possessive Deacon is possessive…  And damn sexy.

  • wasEnkidu

    Ooohh…do I see a glint of defiance in those green eyes? He’s getting angry just thinking about it again. So far he’s felt love and then anger strong enough to kill. We have to assume from the way he beat Jeff around back on day 3 that he’s never felt much emotion whdn killing. Maybe satisfaction over doing his job or a kind of pleasure. (Which scarily fits the idea that he’s got the emotional maturity of a small child. Empathy is a TRAINED behavior)
    But he killed out of desperation here. Out of anger that they were going to hurt his Jeff who doesn’t need to die and is the only person Deacon has ever connected with. They made him mad enough to kill! Isn’t he hard-wired against that?? O.o

  • thisboybroken

    YEA!!!!!

  • Aikka

    Love the page -as always ^^”-

    As far as Maven is scary here etc.
    it’s the last 2 panels with Deacon that i’m just staring at.

    And what he says probably wil be my next status :>
    [Just now i have a link to my christmas fanart there so i want to keep it for a while..."XD]

    Also, a little off-topic, you know what i dreamed about today?
    As far as the whole dream was about something else -which i don’t really remember now anyway- there was a moment in it, when i woke up (not for real, just in that dream), went to check the new page here, and discovered that for christmas you gave us more new pages XDD but that was just a dream ;-;

    And Yay my fanart ^^
    even if i knew it will be posted today i’m really happy to see it here ^^

    Also i’m finally credited by “Aikka” not my DA name… i always wanted to ask you to change it but just kept forgetting to do it “XD So, not sure why you changed it now but thanks anyway ^_^”

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you, Aikka. And happy to change your name. Why did I do it? It just seemed more consistent, especially seeing as you are such an awesome presence in the comments. :)

      • Aikka

        Hehe, thank you! ^-^’

  • eleutherios

    It’s something you wouldn’t understand, Mavzilla.  It’s called love.  A profound insight into one of the greatest mysteries of the human condition unfolding before your eyes, yet all you can do is shout at it and demand answers.

    And you call yourself a doctor.  Psh.

    • Lucy0in0the0Sky

      Mavzilla = perfect descriptor.

      • Virginia Hull

        Mavzilla: Possibly an android! 

        • qu_gon_robot

          That’s exactly what I was thinking the entire time!

          • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

            Ooo. The investigator is an android, too? Very Blade Runner. :)

        • Ryn

          it’s nice thought. better an android than a corporate tool.

  • Ayella

    Merry Christmas Alex, Winona, Deacon, Jeff and Maven, and to every Artifice fan out there. Have a happy one.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Merry Christmas to you too, Ayella! Thanks for being such an awesome reader. I hope you have a happy one too. :D

  • KBatty

    The juxtaposition in panel two is absolutely amazing. It’s a Christmas Eve Miracle! *snicker*

    Happy holidays, guys. <3 Especially Alex and Winona, who have worked so hard on this great comic, and caused us readers to develop something resembling a little community of our own because of it.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Happy holidays to you too, KBatty! Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments and support. I’m very happy to have you as a reader. :)

  • SteveMcSheffrey

    Is she using the power of her vagina to make Deacon talk?  It would work on me, especially if there were some threat of having to see it with the protective skirt…

  • fujoshifanatic

    I love this page! Maven’s death glare and victory sneer in panels one and two are epic! But I love most of all the transition of emotion on Deacon’s face in the last two panels. That look of pain is so profound and yet, in the moment before the last panel, you can just hear him think to himself, “No regrets,” before he acquires that look of resolved determination and starts to recount the events of the retrieval mission.

    Nicely done, and while I enjoy Maven and Deacon’s interactions, I am excited to be returning to Da Vinci Four! Hopefully they’ll get to enjoy just a liiittle more happiness before shit gets real?

    At any rate, Merry Christmas/Chanukah/Kwanzaa/Festivus/whatever it is you celebrate to Alex, Winona, and all the Artifice fans who make this such a great place to visit! :-D

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Happy Holidays to you too, fujoshifanatic! I really appreciate what a wonderful presence you’ve been in the comments . And I hope to continue seeing you here into the New Year! :)

      Je ne regrette rien…

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_DFOT27UVENW4Y2FMHEF62A2MEM Little Bit

    OhhhoooooooooooI LOVE the last panel

  • Erica

    damnn, he’s all “no one can hurt jeff.  my jeff. >:|” hahahaha yes Deacon SHOW HER WHO’S UR MAN >:O :D on a side note, maven’s a little close there. XD i mean if she wanted to look down on him, she’s doing a very thorough job. XP

  • yellowrock

    I like how she glares him into submission.  It’s like she’s using invisible eye lasers or something.  The terrified look on his face is nice too.  :3

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_ODTYRNLPDTIZWUVMJBCDAFY27E DivaLady

    Niiiiiiiiiiiiice!

  • That_Cheshire

    I usually just lurk, but after seeing this page I had to comment! I definitely think the first panel should be a print or a banner or something. It is simply amazing. I just love the expressions, especially “Mavzilla” staring down at Deacon. It’s simply hilarious.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. Well, I am working on bookmarks. If there is enough interest, I can certainly make that happen. :)

  • That_Cheshire

    The first panel is glorious! I couldn’t stop laughing after seeing it.

  • Adam Black

    Alex and Winona,
    Just thanks…

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      You’re very welcome, Adam. Thank you for sticking with us! :)

  • akagenki

    She is totally getting off on this. Heaven knows what she’s fantasizing in the second panel. She makes me a little nauseous.

    • http://www.facebook.com/singstoimaginarybeings Amber Lynn O’Connor

      “Getting off”? In the sense that she’s getting satisfaction and perhaps enjoying it on a personal level rather than a detached professional one, but Maven’s no dominatrix. Just very good at what she does, and believing in a little self-indulgence when she knows– or thinks she knows– the answer she wants is coming.

      • akagenki

        I wouldn’t say she’s a dominatrix but I can’t imagine she would have a more satisfied look on her face after an orgasm. Whether it’s just a demented mental fulfillment or sexual as well, she gets off on it.

  • qu_gon_robot

    OMFG Da Vinci Four. ♪♫ It’s been too loooong ♪♫

    Thank you for this magnificent-made-of-awesome page!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      You’re very welcome, qu_gon_robot! (And yes, off to Da Vinci Four!)

  • Yukiness

    Deacon’s eyes being green threw me off a little. i could have sworn they were another color in the beginning.

    !
    Do they change according to his mood/moral or any type of fluctuations within his system? If they do, that would be beyond knarly.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hmm. They should always be green. Are you seeing pages where they are not?

  • crimsonkiss22

    Well, I imagine our visit to Da Vinci Four this time will be less than sexy. Although, Deacon murdering a retrieval team is its own kind of sexiness. 

    Hrm, Maven is smiling rather meanly when Deacon looks away from her. Me thinks she is quite pleased when he is bowing down to her authority. Granted, that could just be because that’s what he’s designed to do, and she’s glad to see that Deacon can’t deny his programming for long. Everything she’s heard so far has only been Deacon ignoring his orders and acting *shudder* human. 

    Great page! Love Deacon’s face in the last panel! He isn’t afraid of you Maven. >:|

  • ayumi hamano

    I half expect Decon’s next line to be. “And I never will.” 

  • http://www.xenophobia-theambassador.com Blythe Jove

    I love the juxtaposition of the death glare with the smug smile. 

    I don’t think she’s really overly emotional. I think she’s just manipulating the ever living hell out of him. 

    Thus she’s more evil then anything. 

  • http://twitter.com/Dannysmartful Dan Miller

    I think she’s really cranky because it’s been a long day.  Personally I’d be a total jerk if I didn’t get a break and/or food after a long day.  I think her angry reactions are normal…unless, she is a Fembot.  *gasp*

  • ithilloke

    Love the colour change in the eyes! I’d watch myself if I were her…

  • Jennie Yates

    Decon really is one BAMF.

  • Ryn

    as of page 60, i no longer like that woman. though she’s not at Roy chewing proportions yet. *cuddles D*

  • http://www.facebook.com/singstoimaginarybeings Amber Lynn O’Connor

    Yes, now we get to see Deacon kicking some ass in the name of love! The best kind of carnage is straight from the heart! XD

    Seriously though, excited to go back to Da Vinci Four– besides, the Maven hatred in the comments is getting a little excessive– and see what happened to Jeff. And Merry Christmas Alex, Winona, and everybody~

  • Lorescien

    You go, Deacon!! :D

  • http://cathcer1984.dreamwidth.org/ Cathcer

    Aw, what a wonderful Christmas present! Happy Holidays guys :)

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_J7W4JMZ6MXCVA6KKCFVAMW44OU Summer

    That is PRECISELY what I wanted to see out of Deacon!  Kick ass, my friend!  KICK ASS!!!!

  • Whitewingtip

    Merry Christmas everyone!

  • leorising

    At last and, alas, the truth finally comes out. Of course, that’s what she’s been pushing for the entire time. She looks so proud of herself for emotionally beating him into that admission.

    I am so totally of two minds regarding this page. Grr. *sigh*

  • http://lauand.livejournal.com/ lauand

    This is a great webcomic. Good story, splendid story-telling. I’m looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

  • CommodoreZelda

    Good boy, Deacon! You stand up for yourself!! I can’t wait to see what happens on Da Vinci Four!!!

  • http://twitter.com/wafflebiz Tara Waffle

    Deacon, protecting his man.
    I need one of those.

    • cjfrankie

      I hear you… I really need one too.

      Alex and Winona, I love this comic and I’m totally in love with Deacon, please keep up the good work and happy holidays!!!

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_PDTJJIX3NWJBC44LWYAG5EUSQE Donna

    the longer this drags out, the more worried I become.  starting to make me wonder if she’s gonna kill time grilling him for her own intellectual benefit- then when he needs a charge, let him shut down.  It would end any near-future problems effectively (while still allowing them to keep him for future study), and they could do whatever they wanted with Jeff.  Sad-face :(  END THE SUSPEEEEENSE :(:(:(

  • Kittery Brazelton

    Little does Dr. Mavin know that she’s made the fatal mistake of positioning herself panel 2 to be on the receiving end of Deacon’s perfect Dragon Punch.  

    Am going to hazard she really doesn’t believe his love for Jeff.  Mistake.   

  • Loretta Olianti

    This Doctor is just stupid, or at least not qualified. Whether your patient is human or some sort of highly evolved robot, that is just not how any normal psychologist acts. Also, what she’s doing is absolutely no use, I’m very sure he would have answered just as easily (if not more) if she had been gentle and open.

    • http://twitter.com/HowlingBusou Howling

      I’m willing to bet that her primary goal isn’t to actually help Deacon; he’s an egg she’s willing to break to make her omelette. 

      Just curious as all hell as to what, exactly, her aims are…

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_UY6MFIQ4LQ3HPB5HGWNERIAKFU Noah

    Maven actually kinda reminds me of my counselor from Middle school… O_o 

  • http://twitter.com/xBriarRosex Amberella Kissafella

    Maven IS rather intimidating.  Especially in panel one!  Poor Deacon doesn’t stand a chance.  That look of utter defeat in him and total “HAHA I PWNED YOU!” in her makes me both giggle and weep for him.

    WHY WONT THEY JUST LEAVE YOUR LOVE ALONE!  *pats deacon* I know, sweetheart, they just don’t understand.

  • kara Uke

    Go Deacon~!
    why aren’t there many people like him ;n;

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_J7W4JMZ6MXCVA6KKCFVAMW44OU Summer

    Camping.  No tents have been pitched so far, but one can only hope (and eagerly await advancing plot).

    • YangYueLan

      *joins* Tea?

      • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_J7W4JMZ6MXCVA6KKCFVAMW44OU Summer

        Indeed :)

  • Kiwilite

    I love the moment where Deacon tells the truth of what happened.  To me, that is one of the things that make him human. I call it the “F*CK IT!” moment.  When he meets Maven’s eyes and tells her he didn’t want to have Jeff killed it’s like he’s TOTALLY defiant to her.  Maven may have pwned him in panel 2 but Deacon’s just getting warmed up……..Just a thought.  Please feel free to shoot it down.

  • http://twitter.com/PockyPuck Meghan

    Good lord that last panel.  Intense green glare whoa. <3 <3 .>  Think we might be seeing some kickass action soon.

  • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

    Feeling a bit under the weather so I might post up the bonus page a few minutes early……..

    • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_YDJF7RCH5VJUD6BVCYKBFMO6NY Megan Rhea

      I second this motion of early-posting.  (It’s one in the morning where I am when you usually post, and the other people in my dorm think i’m crazy, dicking my time away surfing tumblr every tuesday and friday night waiting for the Artifice update.)

      • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

        Your wish is my command. :)

  • wasEnkidu

    I just reread to the end of his recap here and I realized something. In panel two he’s steeling himself. He’s getting his emotions under control so he can tell her the painful part of the story. It’s like he’s scolding himself for letting her get him to open up, especially since she’s in no position to care about his “feelings”. After panel two, his tone changes back to a more mechanical report style narrative. And compared to the relatively legnthy parts where he tells her about his changing relationship with Jeff, this next part is incredibly short.
    I… I have done the same before. It’s kind of sad, but I relate more to computers than people in terms of feelings. Deacon is now how I was as a teen. So I recognize myself in a lot of the ways he reacts to his own therapist. He’s divorcing himself from the narrative. The next part includes him analyzing and critisizing his behavior before SHE can, so he doesn’t get hurt by harsh critisizm. And he rushes through it before any of it has a chance to register emotionally. He doesn’t stop to dwell on any of it because it hurts so much.

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