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PANEL 1
A) DEACON: DOKTER, IN TERUGBLIK ZIE IK IN DAT MIJN OORDELING MISSCHIEN WAT BEDENKELIJK LIJKT IN DEZE SITUATIE, MAAR ZONDER HET VOORDEEL VAN VOORZORG-
B) DR. MAVEN: DEACON IK HEB JE VERPLICHT NIET TE LIGEN, EN IK BESCHOUW DIT ONTWIJKEND GEDRAG ALS LIEGEN!

PANEL 2
C) DR. MAVEN: WAAROM MAAKTE JE MISSIE NIET AF EN DOODDE JE DE JONGEN NIET?

PANEL 3
D) DEACON: HIJ WAS ANDERS VAN DE ANDERE MENSEN DIE IK HEB ONTMOET. ZIJN ERVARINGEN, ZIJN GEVOEL VOOR HUMOR... IK WAS.. IK WAS...
E) DEACON: IK WAS...
F) DR. MAVEN: WAT, DEACON?! WAT WAS JE?!

PANEL 4
G) DEACON: NIEUWSGIERIG.

PANEL 6
H) DR. MAVEN: OVER WAT PRECIES?
I) DEACON: JE MOET BEGRIJPEN -- IK HEB EEN GELIMITEERDE TIJD MET MENSEN GESPENDEERD, GROOT DEEL DAARVAN ONAANGENAAM.
J) DEACON: MIJN INTERACTIES MET ANDERE K.P'S* WAREN... ONBEVREDIGEND.

*K.P's: Kunstmatige Persoon.

Dutch transcript submitted by Pheebs on

PANEL 1:

A) DEACON: DOCTOR, I CAN SEE IN RETROSPECT THAT MY JUDGMENT MIGHT APPEAR QUESTIONABLE IN THIS MATTER, BUT WITHOUT THE BENEFIT OF HINDSIGHT-

B) MAVEN: DEACON, I HAVE USED YOUR MASTER CODES TO COMMAND YOU NOT TO LIE TO ME AND I CONSIDER THIS EVASIVE BEHAVIOR A FORM OF LYING!

PANEL 2:

C) MAVEN: WHY DIDN'T YOU COMPLETE YOUR MISSION AND KILL THIS BOY?!

PANEL 3:

D) DEACON: HE WAS... DIFFERENT FROM OTHER HUMANS I HAD MET. HIS EXPERIENCES, HIS SENSE OF HUMOR... I WAS... I WAS...

E) MAVEN: WHAT, DEACON?! WHAT WERE YOU?!

F) DEACON: I WAS…

PANEL 4:

G) DEACON: CURIOUS.

PANEL 6:

H) MAVEN: ABOUT WHAT EXACTLY?

I) DEACON: YOU HAVE TO UNDERSTAND -- I'VE SPENT LIMITED TIME WITH HUMANS. MOST OF IT UNPLEASANT.

J) DEACON: MY INTERACTIONS WITH OTHER A.P.'S HAVE BEEN... UNSATISFACTORY.

English transcript submitted by Alex Woolfson on

PANEL 1
A) DEACON: DOKTOR, RÜCKBLICKEND SEHE ICH SELBST, DASS MEINE URTEILSFÄHIGKEIT IN DIESER SACHE FRAGWÜRDIG ERSCHEINT, ABER OHNE DEN VORTEIL BESSEREN WISSENS --
B) MAVEN: DEACON, ICH HABE IHRE MASTERCODES VERWENDET UND IHNEN BEFOHLEN MICH NICHT ANZULÜGEN, ALLERDINGS MUSS ICH DIESES AUSWEICHENDE VERHALTEN ALS EINE FORM VON LÜGE AUFFASSEN!
PANEL 2
C) MAVEN: WARUM HABEN SIE IHRE MISSION NICHT ERFÜLLT UND DEN JUNGEN GETÖTET?!
PANEL 3
D) DEACON: ER WAR... ANDERS ALS DIE MENSCHEN, DENEN ICH BISHER BEGEGNET BIN. SEINE ERFAHRUNGEN, SEIN SINN FÜR HUMOR... ICH WAR... ICH WAR...
E) MAVEN: WAS, DEACON?! WAS WAREN SIE?!
F) DEACON: ICH WAR…
PANEL 4
G) DEACON: NEUGIERIG.
PANEL 6
H) MAVEN: AUF WAS GENAU?
I) DEACON: SIE MÜSSEN DAS VERSTEHEN -- ICH HABE NUR WENIG ZEIT MIT MENSCHEN VERBRACHT. UND MEISTENS WAR ES UNANGENEHM.
J) DEACON: MEINE INTERAKTIONEN MIT ANDEREN KÜNSTLICHEN PERSONEN BISHER WAR... UNBEFRIEDIGEND.

German transcript submitted by ckazka on

QUADRO 1:
A) DEACON: DOUTORA, EU VEJO QUE, NA RETROSPECTIVA, O MEU JULGAMENTO PODE PARECER QUESTIONÁVEL QUANTO A ISSO, MAS SEM TER SABIDO ANTES...
B) MAVEN: DEACON, EU USEI OS SEUS CÓDICOS MESTRE PARA COMANDÁ-LO A NÃO MENTIR PARA MIM E EU CONSIDERO COMPORTAMENTO EVASIVO COMO SENDO O MESMO QUE MENTIRA!
QUADRO 2:
C) MAVEN: POR QUE VOCÊ NÃO MATOU ESSE RAPAZ E COMPLETOU A SUA MISSÃO?
QUADRO 3:
D) DEACON: ELE ERA... DIFERENTE DOS OUTROS HUMANOS QUE EU CONHECIA. AS EXPERIÊNCIAS DELE, O SENSO DE HUMOR... EU FIQUEI... EU FIQUEI...
E) MAVEN: O QUÊ, DEACON?! VOCÊ FICOU O QUÊ?!
F) DEACON: EU FIQUEI...
QUADRO 4:
G) DEACON: CURIOSO.
QUADRO 6:
H) MAVEN: COM RESPEITO A O QUE EXATAMENTE?
I) DEACON: VOCÊ TEM QUE ENTENDER -- EU SÓ PASSEI UM TEMPO LIMITADO COM HUMANOS. A MAIOR PARTE DELE, DESAGRADÁVEL.
J) DEACON: AS MINHAS INTERAÇÕES COM OUTROS HA FORAM... INSATISFATÓRIAS.

Portuguese transcript submitted by María Luciana Rolón on

ПАНЕЛЬ 1:
А) ДИКОН: ДОКТОР, ОГЛЯДЫВАЯСЬ НАЗАД, Я ПОНИМАЮ, ЧТО МОЁ ПОВЕДЕНИЕ МОЖЕТ ПОКАЗАТЬСЯ СТРАННЫМ, И ЗАДНИМ ЧИСЛОМ Я... -
Б) МЭЙВЕН: ДИКОН, Я ВОСПОЛЬЗОВАЛАСЬ ПРОГРАММНЫМИ КОДАМИ, КОТОРЫЕ ЗАПРЕЩАЮТ ВАМ ЛГАТЬ, НО МНЕ КАЖЕТСЯ, ЧТО ВЫ ПЫТАЕТЕСЬ УСКОЛЬЗНУТЬ ОТ ОТВЕТА!
ПАНЕЛЬ 2:
В) МЭЙВЕН: ПОЧЕМУ ВЫ НЕ ВЫПОЛНИЛИ ПРИКАЗ И НЕ УСТРАНИЛИ ЭТОГО МОЛОДОГО ЧЕЛОВЕКА?!
ПАНЕЛЬ 3:
Г) ДИКОН: ОН БЫЛ... НЕ ТАКИМ, КАК ОСТАЛЬНЫЕ ЛЮДИ, С КОТОРЫМИ Я ИМЕЛ ДЕЛО. ЕГО ПЕРЕЖИВАНИЯ, ЕГО ЧУВСТВО ЮМОРА... Я... МНЕ...
Д) МЭЙВЕН: ЧТО, ДИКОН?! ЧТО?!
Е) ДИКОН: МНЕ…
ПАНЕЛЬ 4:
Ж) ДИКОН: МНЕ БЫЛО ЛЮБОПЫТНО.
ПАНЕЛЬ 6:
З) МЭЙВЕН: ЧТО ВАМ БЫЛО ЛЮБОПЫТНО?
И) ДИКОН: ПОНИМАЕТЕ, Я НЕ ТАК УЖ МНОГО ВРЕМЕНИ ПРОВЁЛ СРЕДИ ЛЮДЕЙ - И ПО БОЛЬШЕЙ ЧАСТИ, ЭТО БЫЛ МАЛОПРИЯТНЫЙ ОПЫТ.
К) ДИКОН: ОБЩЕНИЕ С ДРУГИМИ СИНТЕТИЧЕСКИМИ ЛЮДЬМИ БЫЛО... НЕУДОВЛЕТВОРИТЕЛЬНЫМ.

Russian transcript submitted by WTCelesta on

VIÑETA 1:

A) DEACON: DOCTORA, PUEDO VER QUE EN RETROSPECTIVA MI JUICIO PARECE SER CUESTIONABLE, EN ESTE SENTIDO, PERO SIN EL BENEFICIO DE LA INFORMACIÓN A POSTERIORI-

B) MAVEN: DEACON, HE UTILIZADO TUS CÓDIGOS MAESTROS PARA ORDENARTE QUE NO ME MIENTAS, ¡Y CONSIDERO ESTE COMPORTAMIENTO EVASIVO UNA FORMA DE MENTIR!

VIÑETA 2:

C) MAVEN: ¡¿POR QUÉ NO COMPLETASTE TU MISIÓN Y MATASTE AL CHICO?!

VIÑETA 3:

D) DEACON: ÉL ERA... DIFERENTE DE OTROS HUMANOS QUE HE CONOCIDO. SUS EXPERIENCIAS, SU SENTIDO DEL HUMOR… YO SENTÍ… SENTÍ…

E) MAVEN: ¡¿QUÉ, DEACON?! ¡¿QUÉ SENTISTE?!

F) DEACON: SENTÍ…

VIÑETA 4:

G) DEACON: CURIOSIDAD.

VIÑETA 6:

H) MAVEN: ¿ACERCA DE QUÉ, EXACTAMENTE?

I) DEACON: TIENE QUE ENTENDER… HE PASADO UNA CANTIDAD LIMITADA DE TIEMPO CON HUMANOS. GRAN PARTE DE ESE TIEMPO FUE DESAGRADABLE.

J) DEACON: MIS INTERACCIONES CON OTRAS P. A. HAN SIDO… INSATISFACTORIAS.

Spanish transcript submitted by Skaro on

Artifice Page 36

Hmm. Curious, huh? And I wonder what kind of “interactions” Deacon is talking about here?

We have some new Fan Art by Diamond-Skull! It’s Deacon and Jeff sharing a tender moment, up close and personal. Thank you very much, Diamond-Skull!

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  • classic_bear

    Deacon adorableness levels have hit a new high!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. Yes, that blush… :)

  • oldmanqfwfq

    D’aw, goin’ all blushy and what-not

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      D’aw, indeed. :)

  • LadyThanatos

    Ahh Deacon BLUSHES! He looks like a little boy caught with his hand in the cookie jar!

    It’s shocking to see the doctor shouting in panel 3. Is she really that frustrated, or did she know her shouting would finally get a response from him? I’m surprised at how genuinely shocked she looks in panel 5. 

    Are we about to get a flashback to some android-on-android action?!

    P.S. Yes, I was camping :)

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      I love campers. :)

      When it comes to Maven, it is best to assume that all or almost all of her reactions are deliberate choices. That said, her patience isn’t limitless and Deacon has been… evasive. So it would not purely have been tactical. And her surprise at his blush is indeed genuine.

  • http://twitter.com/KristinMontoya Kristin Montoya

    OMG, blushing? Deacon you are so cute here! The expressions are perfectly captured. 

    Yeah, “interaction” could mean sex, but I also think about all those AI movies where the main character is different (i.e. A.I., Bicentennial Man, and I, Robot). Maybe Deacon is evolving independent of his programming. This would explain why crazy doctor lady (as I refer to her as) is so interested in his motivations. Can’t have the machines thinking to much for themselves or next thing you know we are all in The Matrix. LOL, guess you can tell I watch a lot of sci-fi movies. 

    Can’t wait for the next page!

    • LadyThanatos

      I agree. I think we might be about to find out why Deacon wasn’t terribly upset when the other androids were blown to bits — much as Jeff wasn’t too broken up about the colonists.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      I think watching a lot of sci-fi movies is serving you here. I like the way you’re thinking about this, Kristin. :)

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_N56SDG2W76GGWEQSYIPIPOJ2XM Samantha louise Black

    Ive read for a while and decided to finaly comment .<

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hey Samantha! Glad you finally decided to comment! And I’m glad to hear you’re liking Deacon! :)

  • Alor_Laneau

    OKAY.
    Deacons face in panel four.
    OMG
    So hawt.

    I was just wondering if any conservatives stray onto this sight and make abusive comments.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. Yep. Hawt….

      And…. so far (knocking on wood here) no one has left abusive comments at all. And for that, I am grateful.

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_ODTYRNLPDTIZWUVMJBCDAFY27E DivaLady

    Awwwww!  Deacon is so tough and emotionless, I didn’t expect him to do cute well, but he does it SOOO well!  DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. :D

  • http://twitter.com/DeathlyMind Elizabeth Oz.

    AWWWWN OMG THE FACE! SO BLOODY CUTE! 

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      :)

  • Malin Skutnabba

    Aaww, I love Deacon’s face and pose in the 5th panel, so adorable~
    Great page as always! :D

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you, Malin! :)

  • Pronombre

    sdfjhjsdfh Deacon is soooooo cute! ;A;
     omg I want one like him~♥♥♥

  • HarmHarm210

    Maven looks surprised in the fifth panel.. or maybe I have very bad eye sight..xP; Deacon looks cute in that panel too. >wn< So Maven made them? owo She said she coded him not to lie… hmm..

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      I think your eye sight is just fine, HarmHarm210. :)

      And… this is where my wonderful readers help me to improve this comic. You see, when Maven said “I coded you not to lie” what she means is “I have used your master codes while issuing a precisely worded command to prevent you from lying.” “Coded” was meant to be corporate slang for that. 

      But if I as a writer need to explain that the fault lies not with the reader, but with my writing. And I can see what’s going on here. 

      I  actually came up with the concepts for Artifice a long time ago. Before the majority of English-speaking people either worked in the computer field or were close to someone who works in the computer field. I might have been able to get away with this slang then.

      But now the verb “coding” has entered everyday language. And what it means is “writing computer code”. So, I can totally see how you all think that she is indicating that not only is she Deacon’s “therapist” but also his maker!

      That would be big news. It’s a logical leap from my choice of words. But it was not my intention.

      So, this means I need to choose her phrase more wisely here. 

      But now I’m faced with a bit of a dilemma. If I simply change “coded” to “commanded” one might think that she simply gave an order—which Deacon might have the option to disobey—when that is not the case. She has used his Master Codes to ensure that he has to comply. This very cute, very geeky comic illustrates the point nicely.

      The problem, though, is that having her say “I used your Master Codes to command you not to lie.” feels at best too wordy to me for her emotion and at worst somehow gives the feel that he might be able to resist those Master Codes, which he can’t. I feel I need the phrase to be short and to the point. I considered “root-commanded you not to lie”, but that implies the concept of a root user which is not something I want to introduce into Artificial Person tech. It’s all about the codes. So, even though it sounds a bit awkward to me, I have decided that “I have code-commanded you not to lie” seems the clearest way to express this.

      I still might change my mind about this. Having her say “I used your Master Codes to command you not to lie” might actually be better. Clearer and perhaps even less awkward. I’ll think about it over the weekend and come to a final determination.

      But either way you , my readers, have done me a great service. This is definitely one of the advantages of publishing this first as a webcomic. If I went straight to print, not only would making this change be impossible (at least for the books already out there), but I probably wouldn’t even know my readers were having this confusion. I am in your debt.

      • http://twitter.com/acjub CK

        When I read “coded not to lie” I simply thought that she had access to his system and  from there made the command code so that he could not lie :)

        • KBatty

          Yeah, I got the impression that she simply knew how to manipulate his programming—not that she was his maker.

      • http://www.facebook.com/boredLindsay Lindsay Johnson

        Ah thank you for the clarification! I can see your reasoning behind doing it the way you did now, and I hope you figure out a comfy wording fit!

  • http://twitter.com/acjub CK

    Oh Deacon is actually blushing! I’m sure he was quite curious indeed. My mind is getting dirty, so I hope this will get dirty soon as well! But dont rush it, I love a good and strong plot!
    Thank you so much for yet another amazing page! Hey will this one be available in print in the future?

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hi CK!

      You’re very welcome! Thank you for your kind words.

      And if there is interest, this will definitely be available for print. We’ve designed these pages from the start to be print-ready. Right now, I’m considering having a special hard-cover edition for the readers. :)

      • http://twitter.com/acjub CK

        Well I’m definitely interested! If you ship the Europe I’m buying! :D

        • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

          I will do all I can to ensure international shipping. I have no idea what it will cost, but I love my international readers and would certainly make international shipping available. :)

  • ChopstickChick

    Money well spent Alex, and I AM a rockstar from ancient egypt, however did you guess!? Hmm curious about what I wonder? Deacon is so freaking cute I mean, I used to think he seemed a bit cold, but as an A.P. that was understandable, however now I’m starting to see why the good doctor is questioning him in the first place. He is showing himself to be remarkably human, or at least he seems to be showing that to me, and that would be a bit off considering he’s a robot, android…thing. We still don’t know where Jeff is in the present when Dr. Meavon is speaking to Deacon, but I hope he is well. Can’t wait for the next page, I’m so into this it’s unreal, and not just because I want to see robot sexy fun times with Jeff and Deacon, but because Deacon is so likeable, his little glimpses of humanity really warm my heart. <3

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you again for your generous donation, ChopstickChick—I’m so glad to hear you’re finding it worth it. :)

      And you’re thinking about Maven’s motivations in just the right way. :)

  • http://www.eastofsanity.com Utopian Trunks

    WOW, he actually rendered her speechless!  Which is understandable, because what an expression!  It’s hilarious to see her flabbergasted, though!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. I agree!

  • KBatty

    For once we see the doctor surprised. Proper thing. I still think she’s too mean to him. I know he’s a “synthetic”, but you would think that even Maven would recognize that he’s got the key characteristics of a sentient life form. He’s self-aware, he’s conscious, he’s able to think independently… and given that he took out the retrieval team, it may be safe to say that he fears being decommissioned, shut down, scrapped… Essentially, although it hasn’t been spoon-fed to us, I would presume he has a fear of death.

    He may not be quite what they intended, but perhaps there’s been a technological evolution of sorts that caused his erroneous behaviour and in turn, turned him from machine to living being.

    That subsequently makes the ability to manipulate his programming somewhat unethical to use, but then again, it’s not like Deacon has any rights. I find it frustrating that Maven or any of the others would expect him to have full command of his emotions, or emotional maturity at all. Simply because he’s packaged in an adult body doesn’t mean he’s going to have the same capacity for appropriate behaviour. He’s lacking a lifetime of experience.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      All very well-reasoned, KBatty. You’re definitely thinking about this the right way. The one thing I might add is that even if Maven is willing to view Deacon as a sentient life-form, she also would view him as a soldier. And soldiers who disobey orders are rarely treated kindly.

      • KBatty

        Perhaps so, but even soldiers have emotions. Give a killing machine a heart and conscience and it might not cope well with its duties.

        • Yaminox

          not taking into account that soldiers have the emotional maturity of an adult. Deacon just doesn’t have the experience.

          • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

            Good points, both of you.

  • kelseyr

    I just love how he fidgets and wrings his hands, I keep forgetting he’s an A.I. with all his little quirks. AND BLUSHING! Cutest. Thing. Ever. I love this comic to death you guys have done a superb piece of work here. 

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you very much, kelseyr! You’re making me blush! :)

  • http://getmeafuckingfanta.tumblr.com/ James

    I just want to hug Deacon in Panel 5 ;P

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      He could definitely use a hug there…

    • ErrorTime

      So do I!

  • http://www.facebook.com/Aldii.nya Al Dii

    Awww that face ♥ Deacon is so adorable!! that face and the way he plays with his hands xD lovely! I really like the fact that yet there has no been serious action between him and Jeff which makes me wonder if there’s ever gonna be or what! every page leaves me wanting more :D

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Yay! Glad to hear that every page leaves you wanting more. Just what I’d hope to hear! :)

  • Emperor_Meiji

    Do I detect genuine empathy from Mol– er, Clarice here? Could it be I’ve misinterpreted her cool, incisive professionalism as malevolence? Is there a shred of real humanity in BOTH of these characters?

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      I would say that there very well might be… 

      Whether either of them would be flattered by that assessment is another matter entirely. ;)

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Mélina-Bédard-Pépin/100001259225191 Mélina Bédard-Pépin

    So cute, i love the shy deacon there!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Me, too! :)

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_OXPDZNZ3FTN6UW4AS7F33Q4U4U AeryonSun

    OMG! Panel five is ADORABLE!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. Glad you think so!

  • http://www.facebook.com/mandy.aspen Mandy Kiturtle Aspen

    NAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW at Deacons face in panel 5 :3 Winona…your art is continually amazing and has the wonderful ability me experience such a broad range of emotions…you win at life! XD And Alex, your dialogue is just wonderful, drawn out enough to prolong the experience but not to the point of making it frustrating. Needless to say am amazed as always at this comic! Great job guys!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Gosh, thank you so much, Mandy! Trying to strike that balance between Deacon being frustrating for Maven but not having this interaction be (too) frustrating for the reader is a balance I worked hard to try to achieve. I’m really glad to hear it’s working for you! :)

    • W Nelson

      Aww thanks!  I’m so glad you enjoy it so much :D

  • http://nakamanga.com Ari

    that blush says it all and ITS AWESOME!

    • Reign

      IKR?? Deacon blushing is adorable!!

      • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

        :D

  • Reign

    Did Deacon really blush??? Omg that was too cute. Dying to find out if Jeff will satisfy Deacon’s curiosity? Awesome page as always and big thanks to everyone!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you, Reign! I’m really glad you’re liking it! :)

  • SteveMcSheffrey

    Is Maven’s empathy for Deacon ever going to override her mission?  She seems to be moved here and there but she still admits to changing Deacon’s code.  That fact damns her more than anything else credits her…

    • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_LLSHA5B6MKHU3CNSSBQ6AWADVI Matt

      She doesn’t admit to changing his code, she says she coded him, which means  originally when he was first constructed, not to lie to her. She also says she has the power to change his coding but in this case it wouldn’t be effective. As he is such an advanced artificial being they wouldn’t learn anything from simply recoding him because they wouldn’t understand what made him ‘malfunction’ in the first place. This is why she’s going through ‘therapy’ with him, she doesn’t want to alter his code unless she’s forced to.

      • SteveMcSheffrey

        Changing his code and coding him seem to be the exact same thing.  The yelling, brow beating, and treating him like a thing has me disliking Maven more and more.  I also wonder if she’s just a shrink or a shrink that hasn’t treated people in years because she helped in the development of people replacements…

        • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

          She has not treated human patients in some time. At least not with their knowledge or consent.

        • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_LLSHA5B6MKHU3CNSSBQ6AWADVI Matt

          The two are completely different things. If you say I coded you not to lie, this specifically means that when I was originally writing your code and originally programming you, before you were actually activated, you were coded so that you would not lie to me.

          This draws a parallel to a human where it’s been brought up to behave in a certain way. If Deacons code has been left alone it means he is supposed to behave how he was brought up and implies that she is trusting him to tell the truth, or at least be expecting him to.

          If one then says I have altered your code specifically on this occasion to force you not to lie, that’s specifically a breach of privacy and would be akin to giving a human a drug to force them not to lie.

          I was under the impression that Maven was trusting Deacon, but nevertheless was threatening him, by letting him know that this wasn’t how he was supposed to behave and she still had the power to force him into telling her the truth should she so desire.

          It appears however that Deacon was originally coded with some ‘cheats’ in place as it were, so that if Maven uses certain voice commands it will switch Deacon into ‘I cannot lie’ mode – which she has apparently been using during this ‘session’.

      • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

        You would think that’s what she means. And you’d think that because of some imprecise writing on my part. Please see  this comment.

  • http://twitter.com/togainunochi judi

     Another great page. Love it!
     Oh, my question about “lip lock” referred to Deacon and Jeff. I don’t see Maven having any serious “lip lock” other then with her pad or pen, unless you are going to surprised me. :D

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Glad you like the new page, judi! Thank you!

      (And yes, I figured that was what you meant. I was just being a little silly in my response. Please forgive my AlexHumor. It’s an acquired taste.)

  • fujoshifanatic

    Oh-ho! Now we’re getting to it! Deacon’s face in panel 4–so cute! :-3 I think Dr. Maven is more shocked/curious than empathetic towards Deacon. I’m sure she definitely didn’t code him for…these types of feelings/behaviors and wants to get at the bottom of how they developed.

    Alex and Winona, you two are spinning this tale through your art and dialogue so superbly that I really don’t care about questions like “how does an android blush?” among, er, other bodily functions. You have overridden my logic circuits to the point where I’m just enjoying the ride, and not many comics can do that. For that I commend you. :-)

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you, fujoshifanatic! I’m glad we’ve gotten you to buy into the conceits of this world. :)

      And for more about Maven’s coding (and why Alex needs his wonderful readers), please check out this comment.

    • W Nelson

      Hehe that’s awesome that we’ve got your belief sufficiently suspended!  I’m glad it puts you into the world so thoroughly :D

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_XZOTZTAZPMFVIXZFGDN2FLCVLU JohnP

    Another great page. I enjoy the little things, like the corporate screen saver on the computer monitor in the background.  Did you all catch that she “coded” him. So she’s not only a shrink, she’s a maker. She has more power than I thought. I love the blush expression on panel four as he looks up and away and the squirming body language of panel five.  The pause seems to me where Deacon is thinking, “I just told you a really big secret, how are you going to react?…”
    ( I was amused by the unfortunate placement of the plant, it looks like it’s coming out of his head.)

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hello JohnP!

      I’m glad you’re catching the little details like the screensaver—Winona and I put in a lot of effort looking to sweat those details. :)

      And as for the question of whether Maven is Deacon’s “maker” (and for reasons why I’m so lucky to have readers like yourself), please see this comment.

    • W Nelson

      Hehe, that plant does occasionally get back there and look a bit like a feathery headpiece.  I think of it as Deacon Does Vegas.

  • Dex X.

    panel four and five. some of the best in the entire comic. D: 

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. I like them a lot too, Dex. :)

  • http://www.facebook.com/boredLindsay Lindsay Johnson

    Hmmmm makes me wonder if Maven wrote the base code for all of the A.I.s or whether Deacon was a special case. Cause really this is sounding like motherly interrogation techniques. “I brought you into this world and I can take you out, but I would really rather not have to!” XD

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      I could see why it sounds like that. But for more information about this (and why readers like yourself are so helpful to me), please see this comment.

  • Charles Anson

    His blush, oh my god that’s adorable. X3

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. I think so too, Charles. :)

  • Kayla

    Deacon!! Oh god why are you so cute. I really love the body language in this comic – it’s all very realistic and it’s nice that readers can tell the way the characters are feeling completely by their body and expression. Amazing!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Yes. Winona does such a great job with that, right? :)

    • W Nelson

      I’m glad it resonates so well with you :D

  • http://twitter.com/Its_me_Alis Alis~~

    He. Blushed.

    Can’t comment anything else ‘cos I’m too busy making really embarassing sounds caused by massive cuteness from Deacon.

    I’m lying I can comment something else: curious huh? Unsatisfactory with other A.P.s? Deacon you naughty boy! <3

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. :)

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Thomas-Stermer/1214936705 Thomas Stermer

    OMGHEBLUSHEDTHATISSOCUTEIWANTTOSQUISHHIMINTOPIECES.
    *dies from lack of air*
    But OMG EVEN THE DOCTOR SEEMS SHOCKED. :D I am so glad I got to read this before work BECAUSE NOW I JUST WANT TO STARE AT THE CUTENESS OF A BLUSHING DEACON. :D 

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Heh. That’s awesome. :)

  • Shinashi

    Oh, fuck, you tapped into my weak spot. Nothing like a stoic and emotionally detached partner being curious about a prospective love interest.

    Even though the setting is all wrong… sort of… I see a parallelism between Deacon and Jeff and Iason and Riki from Ai No Kusabi, XD, and several other pairings that are not so different, haha. Me likey, me likey~

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      An interesting comparison, shinashiasusual. So much of that story (at least in the anime) seemed to be about power dynamics. I wonder if you’ll find that echoed here…

      • Shinashi

        Well, when you have an android who was on a mission to kill you… It has started out that way kind of… But it has definitely lost its fire by now, XD. But if it comes back, I will complain!

  • biacon01

    OH MY GOD. I liked deacon before but now I’m downright love with him! That fourth panel did it for me, it is soooooo CUTE. Dr. Maven is also one beautiful lady. Also love the body language, you guys are awesome, keep up  the good work :D

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you, biacon01! I’m really glad you’re enjoying it! :D

  • http://twitter.com/Juni_gatsu Lyrica Sojourn

    Oh my god, Deacon is just so adorable when he’s nervous and self conscious XD L

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Agreed. :)

  • http://tatatroses.blogspot.com/ Tatat Roses

    the 4th fucking panel killed me.
    not to mention his sad puppy look at panel 5 wtf pure loooove

    i love this comic so much.
    and i love deacon :))

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      It is a puppy look, isn’t it!

      So glad to hear you’re enjoying Artifice, TatatRoses!

  • It’s a secret :3

    *squeeeeeeeee!!!!* Totally cute!!!! I still miss Jeff. I want more!!!!!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Glad you found it cute. And more is coming! We might even get to see Jeff again… ;)

      • It’s a secret :3

        Might???? Better not be a Might… It better be a Will see Jeff. XD

  • http://twitter.com/frizzamabob Dr. Frizzy

    Coming out of lurking because Deacon is just THAT cute on this page. I couldn’t contain myself.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Yay! It was the blush, wasn’t it? :)

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Kristen-Williams/1774827988 Kristen Williams

    OMG that was toooo cute! Deacon is absolutely adorable in the page! <3 I'm so looking forward to the next page :)

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Glad to hear it, Kristen! :)

  • Henrithe9th

    The blushing part is totally KAWAII!!! Love this comic… Wish they had programmed the word “gay” into his vocab though, would’ve made things way easier! ;)

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you, Henri! 

      (And your request has been forwarded on to the developers for the next point release.)

  • ithilloke

    Heh, Deacon’s “evasionspeak” sounds very much like an ex of mine. Amusing in the extreme!

    I love Dr. Maven’s jaw-drop. She CERTAINLY didn’t expect the word “curious”! :-) 

    The plot becomes interestinger and interestinger….yay!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you, ithilloke! 

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Kyle-Situation-Sheridan/100001595385709 Kyle Situation Sheridan

    There should be an “ai can haz fwend?” meme for panel four.

    • W Nelson

      Make it :D

  • singerblooming

    curious, huh? … OH MY GOD ;D
    HIS FACE IS SO FREAKING ADORABLE I JUST CANT GET OVER IT

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      :D

  • Rissicat

    Oh geez… I just fell in love with Deacon all over again! ^_^

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Yay! :) (He is awfully adorable on this page, huh?)

  • Emperor_Meiji

    Deacon’s face and body language on this page remind me of Shinji Ikari. But even in this awkward situation, I would sure as hell rather hang out with Deacon than have to put up with whiny little Shinji.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Heh. I’ve always had a soft spot for poor Shinji, but I agree, Deacon would be better company. :)

  • SteveMcSheffrey

    BTW, either panel four or five should replace the explosion as your banner…

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Interesting suggestion. Panel 4 is a bit too vertical, but I might be able to do something with panel 5…

      • SteveMcSheffrey

        Doc staring dumbfounded at a sheepish Deacon says a lot about what people need to know about Artifice!

  • Maddie Cook

    OMG his face in Panel 4 is by far my favorite face in the world!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. That’s awesome. Maybe I should consider making it into one of the avatar icons

  • Guest

    Unsatisfactory interactions, eh?

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Yep.

  • Brian Findlay

    I love me some angry-then-suddenly-flabbergasted Maven :D  Aw, Deacon has his ‘don’t kill me for this’ look, how could you not adore it?  Awesome page, definitely looking forward to more awesome plot and executive quality Winona art!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you, Brian! Yes, “don’t kill me for this” is a good way of expressing that expression. :)

  • SholtoMaru

    Well, like everyone else, I’m head over heels for Deacon’s adorable blushing face. It’s interesting to me to begin to understand that the stoic, hardcore Deacon from the beginning isn’t necessarily ALL there is to him. There’s a lot going on in there.

    His mention of interactions with the other A.P’s being unsatisfactory also makes me realize that there was something about Deacon that made him different from them from the start. Something that separated him, set him apart. What was it, I wonder? Some glitch, some blip in his code that was never meant to be? Did someone do this to him deliberately, or is it just a happy (or maybe not so happy) accident?

    Another question. Are Deacon and his android bros supposed to show emotion? Is that normal for them, or is it just a quirk of Deacon’s? And another-other question. I remember from earlier in the comic that all of them look the same. Is that just to make them easier to identify if they’re wandering about in society? …Wait, DO they wander? Okay, so many questions, I have.

    As always, great page! 

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      I like the way you’re thinking about this, SholtoMaru. :)

      In answer to your question, Deacon’s model was designed to experience emotion. Or, at the very least, the experience of certain emotions turned out to be a necessary byproduct of the complex psychology the designers were hoping to achieve. This is one of the reasons why someone with Maven’s expertise is required to work with him.

      There are several reasons why they might choose to have a particular model of synthetic look all the same, but business being what it is, cost was likely a significant factor.

      And as of this time, this model has not yet started shipping to consumers, so no, they do not wander. All of the advanced APs of Deacon’s vintage have been used solely for NoNeCo purposes and tests.

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_GR6CABBKS2RKY72QXHNLTA5SYI Enkidu

    ROBOTS CAN BLUSH!! O[]o
    My mind is blown!
    …..
    Okay, after several minutes to recalibrate myself, I can comment. As cute as it is, I think Deacon blushing is almost as creepy as the infamous smiley-Deacon. But I LOOOOVE panel five! 8D
    He actually caught Maven off-kilter with that confession! And he looks so … so SQUEEZABLE. >w< Poor widdle Deacon!

    Wait, so in that earlier page where he was holding Jeff's arm a BIT too long and he looked embarrassed… Had he just realized that he was enjoying himself with a HUMAN? I have to imagine due to the way he's been treated by humans and how he's designed to wipe them out, his view of humans must be a very low one. Possibly more like upper-intelligent beasts than anything else.
    It must be new to him to enjoy a human's company, especially to find it more fulfilling than the other AP's. So I can imagine how that would lead to curiosity about what ELSE he would enjoy with Jeff.

    • It’s a secret :3

      Well said. :3

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      That would indeed be a new experience for Deacon. And your reasoning is sound. :)

  • http://EIQGOT.com Sawyer Gomez

    Cut! this right here…*points at deacon’s blushy face* THIS IS ULTIMATE ‘AWWW’!!! This makes me miss my husband so bad, cuz of this pouty face!!

    (hope no one minds, I just had to use this image as an avi)

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      I don’t mind you using the image at all, Sawyer. I was even thinking of adding it to the Avatar Icons  (but I haven’t been sure readers have really wanted avatar icons from Artifice so I haven’t been updating them lately.) I think it looks good next to your name. :)

      And I hope you get to see your hubby soon! :)

      • http://EIQGOT.com Sawyer Gomez

        Thank you! I’ll see him next friday <3 But who wouldn't want them? X3 lol my hubby is using the lean in image of Jeff when he's saying "perhaps I just needed a captive audience" lol, he loved that to death.

        • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

          Oh, that’s awesome to hear, Sawyer! You’ll have to get him to comment here so I can see it. ;)

  • Ryn

    omg the 4th panel! and the 5th! the kicked puppy look on Deacon is adorable.

    yeah, it’s no fun being a lab rat to unsympathetic organisms and I’m getting the feeling the other APs were rather bland conversationalists.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Your feeling would be correct, Ryn. :)

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_6ZNOIBKCOQFX74B52BL5ZAFAH4 D

    I am SO impatient for the next update! I want to know what’s going to happen – I feel an ultimate sadness that this can’t POSSIBLY have a happy ending – even if the Company decides to let him keep his pet human to study their interactions, they’re just lab rats. The only possible ‘out’ for them is the mysterious ‘company secret’ that sent his group of APs to the colony in the first place to kill everyone. I wonder what ‘it’ could be?

    Hmmmmmm

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Glad you’re eager to know what happens next, D!

      (And I find your speculation interesting…)

  • http://www.facebook.com/krolosy Angel Krolosy

    omg he is so cute blushing
    it adorable, im in love with him i just want to hug him

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      He could definitely use a hug right about now, Angel. :)

  • http://twitter.com/TenchiTen Liv

    Let me just say, I absolutely adore this page, and all the light it brings to the situation. <3

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you, Liv. That makes me very happy to hear. :)

  • OnyxRose

    All I can think is that the shadow of  Dr. Maven’s hand looks like a penis :S

    • It’s a secret :3

      I just noticed that since you pointed it out. O.o LOL

      • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

        Hmm. Once you see it, you can’t unsee it… >_<

  • http://twitter.com/PGSimms Phoenix Simms

    I’m really loving Deacon’s expressions more and more. I’m also loving the storyline and how it progresses so naturally!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you, Phoenix! :)

  • ErrorTime

    Oh! Deacon’s face! And Dr. Maven seemed to be a little surprised by his comment. But I could understand why he wanted to get to know Jeff, and humans a little better.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Good. I’m glad that feels like that would make sense to you. :)

  • melinda stumpf

    her face in the 6 panel is priceless

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Agreed. :)

  • Yaminox

    unsatisfactory interactions? I gather Deacon is the only AP with a “humanity” glitch?
    if so, it’d make sense people trying to get what’s happening to him and why he deviates from his programing. if they’re not sentient beings.
    i don’t really think he means sex…I mean…with all his self-awareness it would be like sleeping with some robotic clone of him (exactly like that? xp)…really awkward if you ask me (They all look the same!!)
    i can understand why he would be curious about jeff if his only regular interactions were with clones with no personality.

    as a side-note. I really love how Winona portrays body-language. it really gives an insight about the state of mind of the characters. it feels really natural :)

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Yes, it actually really gratifying for me as a writer to see how good the “acting” is in Winona’s art. She totally nails all the subtleties. :)

  • iamlingy

    Ohhh blushie blushie! I see that face<333

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      :)

  • SteveMcSheffrey

    Oh and does this have any bearing: 
    deacon [dee-kuhn]
    noun 1.  (in hierarchical churches) a member of the clerical order next below that of a priest. 2. (in other churches) an appointed or elected officer having variously defined duties. 3. (in Freemasonry) either of two officers in a masonic lodge.

    verb (used with object) 4. to pack (vegetables or fruit) with only the finest pieces or the most attractive sides visible. 5. to falsify (something); doctor. 6. to castrate (a pig or other animal). 7. to read aloud (a line of a psalm, hymn, etc.) before singing it.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      The writer was not familiar with more than one of those definitions when he wrote the script. 

      (And yikes, indeed… Where are you getting these definitions from?)

      • SteveMcSheffrey

        Dictionary.com is your friend…

  • http://profiles.google.com/adamcaverhill Adam Rollstone

    Just caught up and I have to say I love this story. The art is topnotch, just excellent all around.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you, Adam! Much appreciated! :D

  • eleutherios

    Bad sexual experiences?  You’re young, kiddo.  You’ll get over it.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Heh. :)

  • http://www.diary.ru/~elf-2dim/ elf2dim

    deacon soooo cute when blushing)))

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Agreed. :)

  • Lawenta Elar

    I just fully realized that Deacon is amazingly talented at HAVING emotions, but hopeless at HIDING them. :D

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      That does seem to be true, doesn’t it? :)

  • VulcanMindMelon

    Oh my god. Their faces. In the second to last panel. 
    PRICELESS <3 

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Glad you like what you see, VulcanMindMelon! (Love your screenname, BTW.)

  • T Tran

    LOL his face makes me want to pinch it relentlessly.
    Puppy dog look at its best.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Heh. And this is yet another example of how Winona nails everything. This was what I asked for in the script for this panel: 

      PANEL 5: Deacon meeting Maven’s eyes. Deacon looking up like a dog in trouble, afraid to be swatted with a newspaper. Maven, mouth slightly open, truly surprised by this answer.

  • Yukiness

    Panel four made me spit up my cereal. Although the tension is making me itch, I love all the implications of possible boot knocking. Unsatisfactory in what way Deacon, in what way?

    There are Golden Grahams all over the place now

    • KBatty
      • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

        Hehe. Your work, KBatty?

        • KBatty

          No, no… just a meme.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      That’s AWESOME, Yukiness! Just the reaction I was hoping for. ;)

  • Beefnoi

    Deacon looks so cute in panel four <3

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Glad you think so, Beefnoi! :)

  • JLJones

    Poor Deacon; you can really feel how lonely he must have been before meeting Jeff, how lonely he can potentially be if this story doesn’t have a happy ending.  It makes me want to cry for him D:

    Which makes me wonder – since he can obviously blush, is Deacon (or any other AP for that matter)  able to cry?  Not just physically, but is he emotionally capable?

    Ok, time to distract myself before I turn into and emotional wreck :P  C’mooon donation bar… give us an extra treat for a second week in a row… rah rah rah!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      It’s a good question whether Deacon is able to cry, JLJones. Maybe we’ll find out…

      • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_BBHOWFDLZLECVVMJZBJH6FHR7U Toki

        Obviously, I’m not the writer, but how would his eyes function properly if he couldn’t produce tears? :]

        • crimsonkiss22

          I’m sure he’s able to produce tears. Like you said, he’d have a rough go of things if he couldn’t. Unless he’s like a lizard and licks his eyeballs….>_> There’s a nice image…

          As for being emotionally capable, though, that’s a very good question. A lot of men won’t cry in front of other people, because of societal standards. In this world that Alex has created, I can’t see men crying being any more socially acceptable. 

          Looking forward to finding out though!

          • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

            Now I want fan-art of Deacon licking his own eye…

          • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_GR6CABBKS2RKY72QXHNLTA5SYI Enkidu

             Like a lizard? Or how about him just popping one out, breathing on it, shining it up on his suit and then putting it back in?
            o.O Ugh… oh woah. I can picture that WAY too clearly. I think I need to go to bed now.

  • thisboybroken

    Deacon’s face is adorable after he tells her he is curious. Panel five makes me all aflutter. With that look how could you not just give him whatever he wanted???

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. I wonder if Maven would agree? :)

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_DLNZ6OVTRSAG55JZTAV2VFVQKU Jeremiah

    I love how reluctant he is to answer the questions… The page made me feel so squee

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Glad to hear it, Jeremiah! :)

  • telling225

    I am so in love with this comic!!!! 10 out of 10. this just have to become a animated series plz!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      From your lips to God’s (or Studio Bones’s) ears, telling225. :)

      Thank you for your kind words!

      • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_GR6CABBKS2RKY72QXHNLTA5SYI Enkidu

        god, studio Bones, same difference. I LOVED Wolf’s Rain. <3

  • telling225

    I love this comic! Deacon is sooooooooooooooooooo cute! Animated series please! hell i’ll donate to help u guys get the software haha

  • crimsonkiss22

    Blushy faaaaace >w< So cute, Deacon!
    I love professionals like Dr. Maven, asking questions they already know the answers to. She just wanted you to admit it, Deacon… Although I'm not sure she's too thrilled with him at the moment.
    I WILL NOT BE LIED TO! *twitchtwitch*

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Maven will not be lied to or have her questions evaded. Nuh, uh.

  • Emperor_Meiji

    Don’t be mad at me.

    I can’t help wondering why the good doctor is so surprised to learn that Deacon was curious about Jeff when she already assumed that Deacon liked him. Curiosity would seem to be a logical part of an android’s programming; affection would be the real shocker.

    Like I said: Don’t be mad at me. I’m probably just overlooking the obvious.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      It’s a fair question, Emperor_Meiji. I think it’s more that it’s somehow Deacon’s “curiosity” that convinced him to disobey his orders and keep Jeff alive that she finds surprising. If he had just answered, “because it turned out I liked him too much to kill him”, that would have been an answer she might expect (even if it didn’t mean good things for their android soldier program.)

      But he (blushingly!) says it was because he was “curious”, which Maven finds a bit baffling. He’s a soldier, not a science bot. Curiosity would not be a big factor in his design. 

      So she now has to ask “Curious about what exactly?”

  • http://profiles.google.com/michanforever A. V. M.

    Ahh~ Deacon blushed, I can’t believe it! And then in the next panel, the look he gives the Dr…too adorable <3 *fangirl moment*

    Ahem…anyways. I'm curious myself, about Deacon's interactions with other humans. Thinking back to the very beginning of this webcomic and the way that man (whose name I can't remember Dx) treated him, those interactions must have been bad indeed. Hmm…

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      That would be Roy who was giving Deacon a hard time in the first pages. :)

  • http://twitter.com/SarielLunar Sara Barrera

    Oh My God a blushing Deacon! Oh My God a blushing Deacon! Oh My God a blushing Deacon! Oh My God a blushing Deacon! Oh My God a blushing Deacon! OH MY GOD A BLUSHING DDDDDEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAACCCCCCONNNNNN!!!!  -faint-

    Now that I got that out of the way…. Doesn’t he have white blood?  Wouldn’t his blush actually be white?  Or is is skin working with programming that makes him blush red…  I’m nit picking. Sorry. 

    Love the way this is going.  LOVE IT!!!  Oh man I can’t wait for next Saturday! 

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Glad to hear you’re loving Artifice, Sara—that makes me happy to hear.

      And I checked in with tech support about your question. Much like the natural feel of his skin, a reddish color to his blush is a feature added to help him blend in on covert operations. They pointed out to me that if they had not added that this feature, he might look rather cadaverous in general with his white fluids, even when he wasn’t blushing. 

  • http://twitter.com/SarielLunar Sara Barrera

    By the way I have to say I love the body language displayed in this comic!  It’s so natural.  LOVE IT!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Yes, Winona does an awesome job with that, right? :)

  • Exile 755 is a Higglytown hero

    I JUST MADE THE MANLIEST SQUEE EVER.

    GOD, I LOVE YOU. X’D

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hooray for manly squees! ;)

  • LaSalvi

    Aaaw, he’s so adorable XD

    Killing machine / Sweet clueless little boy : PERFECT MIX

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Heh. Just like Reese’s Peanut Butter Cups…

      • LaSalvi

        You read my mind.

  • http://twitter.com/xBriarRosex Amberella Kissafella

    I love the adorable blush!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      :)

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Hisoka-Kurosaki/100001305712793 Hisoka Kurosaki

    waaaah! How cute! Another page of adorableness, and this time solely Deacon. Poor thing can’t lie? Maven, you evil wicked lady. =)

    He looks so pouty in the second to last panel to. I love this. See, Deacon has more of an opinion and personality then these human are giving their creations credit for. <_<

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Glad you’re liking the adorableness, Hisoka—and Deacon’s “personality”. :) 

  • http://demented.thecomicseries.com/ Doomy

    Ooooh programmed not to lie?
    Sucks to be you, Deacon…!!  

    But aww, Deacon’s blushing face has made my day ~

    Can’t wait for more! <3

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Glad to hear it, Doomy! :)

    • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_GR6CABBKS2RKY72QXHNLTA5SYI Enkidu

      Can’t lie outright to her, but he sure can evade questions like an eight-year-old! XD

  • typhonblue

    Dr. Maven seems ever so slightly compassionate in this one. Surprised into compassion? Each page that gets uploaded I’m hoping we’re back with Jeff… Somehow I’m not disappointed there’s more Maven, but I still hope for Jeff…

    BTW, Alex I have an absolutely unrelated question about your comic site operation. Where did you get the donate bar and how did you set it all up? 

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hi Alison!

      Boy, finding that donation bar was actually pretty hard. I went through a bunch of WordPress plugins before finding Donation Can over at 

      http://treehouseapps.com/donation-can/

      which met all my needs. Specifically,

      - it integrated with PayPal
      - it had a counter that would update in real time
      - it had the option to reset the counter back to $0 once I had hit my goal (after I asked for this option; the developer is very responsive)
      - It did not add any additional fees outside of what PayPal charges me (very important—many other counters claim to offer a “service” and charge you for it!)
      - it was a widget thus it was easy to place on my site
      - it was easy to design in an attractive manner with CSS, etc.
      - it’s 100% free so you can try it out painlessly

      I feel very comfortable recommending it to other webcomics creators (and in fact recently left a donation myself to the developer for all his hard work).

      Hope that helps!

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Leon-De-Bourbon-Orléans/100000809017060 Leon De Bourbon Orléans

    Oh god, his blush is just too adorable. You’re killing me here!!!!!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Mwa ha ha. ;)

  • Pervertida Pensante

    I love it.

    I’m wondering how far had he meet him.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Glad you’re liking Artifice, Pervertida!

      And I’m not sure I 100% understand your question, but perhaps it wasn’t a question, but just something you’re sharing. If you do have a specific question, though, please let me know! :)

  • Dracca

    Interactions?  But isn’t he a sort of robot?  If he’s prgrammed to work, they don’t need to give him/them a penis?

    • protip protip

      Well, that would entirely depend on the scope of his missions. If there’s a known exterior anatomical difference of an artificial person on a clandestine infiltration/sting mission that would be the first thing that would get checked.

      • Dracca

        True, but would they also check if it’s working? xD

        • typhonblue

          Yes. They would.

          • Dracca

            creepy…

    • SteveMcSheffrey

      The classic definition of an android is an construct where all biological functions are duplicated by mechanical means.  I did question at first why the corporation would include the working junk but I’ve rethought it.  Business minded and goal oriented businessmen wouldn’t but they wouldn’t be designing the line.  A team of scientists tasked with creating artificial life with a big budget would go nuts with creating artificial life.  They’d probably even figure out a way to make fingernails and hair grow and claim the android is such a complex creation that they couldn’t omit any of their successful design without fear of crashing the system.  And the penis?  It’d be a point of pride and no doubt John Holmes big!

      • Dracca

        Neat explanations, thanks!
        And btw, it’s a great comic!

        • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

          Thanks, Dracca! Glad you like it! :)

      • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_GR6CABBKS2RKY72QXHNLTA5SYI Enkidu

        Hey you’re right! It’s not the military men or the guys in suits that are designing and building the APs, it’s the techie nerds in the white lab jackets! They’d want to make him as human as possible, but “better”. IE his sense of touch, his intelligence and adaptability would be beyond human norms.

        In fact, if not for the corporate dollars at stake, his creators would probably be over the MOON to learn that Deacon is capable of developing complex emotional bonds with a living human being! It lives! EET LIIIIIIVES!!! 8D

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Abbi-Orenstein/100000436550169 Abbi Orenstein

    omg the look on his face he’s so adorable. that therapist scares me. she made a bad ass turn in to a 8th grader caught in a crush.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Yes. Maven is a powerful woman. Glad you’re liking what you’re seeing, Abbi! :)

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_5MSVBUQDA5A6S4G4B546UR7JMM Jessica Venar

    Oh lord he’s so cuuuute. And I like her shocked expression at his being curious <3 But he seriously is adorable. -pinches those cheeks.-

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hehe. :)

  • http://twitter.com/icraveyaoi icraveyaoi

    Oh he’s so cute I want to bake him a pie. He wouldn’t have to eat it, but I would have to bake it. It’s the shading on his bottom lip for ‘curious’ that gets me. It’s no so uncommon a convention for there to be inquisitive robots. I think it would be in the nature of robots to want to learn. And it would be cheaper programming too if they did.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Heh. Deacon pie, huh? What kind of ice cream would go with that, I wonder…

      • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_GR6CABBKS2RKY72QXHNLTA5SYI Enkidu

        VANILLA!! The only kind of ice cream to go with YAOI of course!

  • Lorescien

    Second to last panel = effing adorable! Gosh, I love this so much. He’s innocent, and yet he’s not. And I totally want to see him and Jeff back together after the whole interrogation is done with. They’re too damn cute together not to bring them back together after the whole ordeal. :3 Love it all, and keep up the good work!

    • http://www.facebook.com/people/Abbi-Orenstein/100000436550169 Abbi Orenstein

      well considering how they wanted the poor kid dead in the first place just because he lived on a colony. I dunno if they will  be able to get together without some superpower robot rescue. I’d like to learn more about this world and why some corruption had a right to send robot-men in to kill scores of people. course I’m also a little squicked about the severe lack of LGBT rights. an abortion because your kid is gay? that’s so disgusting. I can’t wait to read more.

      • http://www.facebook.com/people/Abbi-Orenstein/100000436550169 Abbi Orenstein

        I meant to type corporation but corruption works too. lol

        • Lorescien

          Hahaha, corruption does work, too. I’m curious as well, though I think a lack of rights is what keeps the story going so well. If they had just as many rights as we do now, the inner conflicts wouldn’t be nearly as strong. (Btw, I think it’s wrong to have abortion at all, but that’s just little ol’ pro-life me.) And I’m pretty sure some superpowered robot rescue can happen if Deacon really wants to do it. After all, if he can go against orders once, he can totally do it again. >:D

      • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

        Glad to hear you want to see more, Abbi. :)

        • http://www.facebook.com/people/Abbi-Orenstein/100000436550169 Abbi Orenstein

          omg yes! I can’t fricken’ wait. I love the art I love the story. this is awesome.

          • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

            Thank you, Abbi! You’re a total sweetheart! :D

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you, Lorescien!

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_JUN5ZES7FYP2OXWSRVNHMXYKLI Miranda

    Deacon just turned into a nervous teenager sooo freaking adorable. the doc needs to wrap this session up so he can get back with jeff. *giggles*

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      I’ll pass that request on to Maven. :)

  • http://twitter.com/OtakuMuffin Ayisha Shabazz

    Oh goodness, Deacon has such cute faces. >.<

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Glad you think so, Ayisha!

  • http://www.facebook.com/Prussen Chelsea Prussia Knotts

    Eeeehehe! Why does Deacon have to be so dang adorable! <3

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Just to torment you, Chelsea. :)

  • samae

    Ok, am i the only one who noticed mavens face in the last panel, she looks kinda like “opps” or “oh…….” lol. Deffinetly killed her fire there decon.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Yep. It was not the answer she was expecting. :)

      • http://www.facebook.com/people/Abbi-Orenstein/100000436550169 Abbi Orenstein

         yeah considering how unlighted these people are (killing a colony of people who are probably innocent and yeah there probably kids we didn’t see.) i see rough waters ahead. considering their lack of care of human rights she may be tied by her superiors to “fix” him. man I hope he and jeff escape to an island together.

  • Shika

    Haha, he looks so shy and adorable blushing ~ !

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_DTHOYEO5HOFZKAY2C27OUE6KFI CotinaS

    I don’t think you could be told enough how wonderful this story is. Every new page exposes a new facet about Deacon that as an AP he is not suppose possess. Each little bit is such a tantalizing tease that you have to return to see what else is going to happen. And Winona’s art is just so wonderfully expressive and lovely. She does with her art what you do with your words.
    You two are like peanut butter and chocolate;you just work so well together^_^.

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Thank you very much for your very kind words and very generous donation, Cotina. Your comment has put a big smile on my face. 

      I am definitely super lucky to be able to work with someone as talented as Winona on this project. But I’m also super lucky that this collaboration has put me in contact with awesome readers like yourself. Thank you again! :)

  • Adam Black

    Deacon has never looked more attractive or more human.

    Alex, as usual you have toyed with us and avoided the main issues,
    which i see as thus:

    (1) Does he take American A/C current or will I need a special adapter?
    ….I hope i dont need one more proprietary one

    (2) How much a donation gets me those ” command codes”.
    Its only fair,he’llhave mine soon enough

    Winona,  Your talents are shining here.
    great on on faces and body language

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      Hi Adam!

      I have a question in to tech support about whether you’ll need an adapter, but in terms of the command codes, I can assure you that with the purchase of one of our ASO modules, you will receive all codes, including the master ones. You can even change them if you’d like! You’ll have maximum flexibility to ensure that your ASO serves your needs and your needs alone.

      While the final shipping price of the ASO models has not yet been determined, I can assure you will find they will be competitively priced at but a fraction of your country’s gross domestic product. Considering the long-term benefits of this advanced model, I’m sure you will see that the benefit far outweighs the cost. :)

      Thank you again for your interest in the next generation of intelligent and robust synthetic infantry. Together we truly can manufacture a brighter tomorrow.

      • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_GR6CABBKS2RKY72QXHNLTA5SYI Enkidu

         Wait, does that mean I can run an ASO in Linux?? Oh man that would be awesome! Can you picture a linux-based AP? He’d be some sort of hipster android with a taste for snarky t-shirts! XD

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_J7W4JMZ6MXCVA6KKCFVAMW44OU Summer

    I am very very very VERY glad I discovered this lovely webcomic!  It’s a delight and a refreshment to read something so heavily plot-based in the yaoi genre!  Certainly I loves me the hot man-time, but a slow building character insight is irresistible in its own right, and doubly so here.

    I do not hesitate to say that Maven is empowering, inspiring, and intimidating all at the same time.  

    I also wish to give Deacon a hug because, in this recent comic, he is blasted adorable.  Does he like hugs?  Or would he prefer a hug from someone with only one X chromosome?  Alas if so!  My desire to hug him is only outdone by my sheer curiosity (heh) to see where this is going!

    • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

      I’m very glad you’re enjoying the comic, Summer! I am trying to do something a little different here—and I know it won’t be for everyone—but it makes me happy to hear my more plot-based story is working for you. :)

      And as for whether Deacon would like hugs? Before the Da Vinci Four mission, I woud have said certainly not. But now? Well, let’s just wait and see… ;)

      • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_J7W4JMZ6MXCVA6KKCFVAMW44OU Summer

        I really like plot-based works.  Emotional investment in the characters makes the whole experience more satisfying overall than just two guys getting “nekkid.”  That and we get treated to adorable moments like Deacon blushing.  Seriously.  I actually squee’d from the cuteness.  

        Well, I will not chance a guy who’s so much stronger than me taking offense from wanting to hug him, but the offer is totally there if he should desire it.  I also offer a hug to you, kind sir, for writing this :-)

        • http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/ Alex Woolfson

          Hey Summer! Yes, we’re totally on the same page about how emotional investment makes everything, even the physical parts of a romance story, more satisfying. Frankly, with a few rare exceptions, I actually need it to get into erotic work at all. If a story just starts with “Wham, bam, thank you, Sam!”, I might keep reading, but that scene won’t have been hot for me. But get me to care about the characters and then you’re talking. ;)

          And your hug is gratefully appreciated by me and reciprocated. :D Thank you!  (And you’re wise to wait and see with Deacon. Very few have survived his “hugs”…)

  • Diseasedface

    I haven’t commented in a while but……….~SWOONS~

    DEACON YOU LOVEABLE LUGGGGG ALL THIS EMOTION…. IFEEL IT OOZING OUT YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

    UGH. WHAT A FANSTIC BUILD UP!

    I THANK YOU TERRIBLY WONDERFUL WRITER AND COMIC ARTIST FOR THIS <333333333333

  • adrdem

    This is very interesting.

    From the page before this till here, you’re notice the hand gesture our robotic friend makes and his body language from sitting straight till crouched down.

    THIS IS FAB.

  • Shaphina

    I found this comic not to long ago and was hooked instantly! I just love it so much I started reading it again. Just wanted to say not only is the comic awesome in many was but I love Deacon’s pose in panel 5 and expression in panel 4. For a handsome android he sure can be cute! 

  • Jennifer Closen

    D’awwwwwww~!  Deacon puppy posture in panel 5…  X3

  • http://www.facebook.com/dkkauwe Daniel Kauwe

    blush! :P

  • http://pulse.yahoo.com/_BFUFQTQJJXDJJDICVGRLIYIW64 My lifei

    Deacon~

    The blushing (d’aaaaaw) and the puppy-slouch (aaaawwwwww) and just both of their facial expressions were amazing.

  • http://twitter.com/PrettyLittleDiz Anna Lea

    I like how she says she used his master commands to tell him not to lie, yet she had to TELL HIM that so that he wouldn’t lie.

    Yeah, Maven, how those master codes working out for ya?

  • Ikaru Sentinal-K’Valshar

    Deacon’s blushy face and than his slouched hangdogged look in the next panel are seriously the cutest things ever. Even on the face of a killer-bot. <3

  • Ree

    Aa;lflkasdklf these facial expressions and poses are always so wonderful 8D

  • Jasmin

    Omg, he’s the cutest thing ever. ;___;

  • Daniel Notsoinnocent Lane

    D’awwwwwwww~ He’s like an adorable little killing-machine puppy!!!! <3

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